Thousands of years following the story of Archmage, Twilight takes on a new student. One who doesn't know the first thing about advanced magic. One who needs to start from Square One.
“I had planned on seeing her today anyways. She’ll jump at the chance to take a little more off the top.”
“What? I just saw Lotus two days ago… And besides, do you really want me to go see the one mare who would legitimately hate you for what you did to my mane?”
I am confused, the second line makes it sound like Star was surprised/confused that Twilight suggested she go see Lotus, despite having earlier said she was already planning doing just that.
I’d come to accept the night as a constant companion, one who was readily available to assist and always there. Always watching. Masturbation had become a little bit more awkward in light of that fact, but still…
I like the skipping of learning, it takes a different turn on the story where learning isn't the main priority for the majority of the story, similar to the first book. It gives the book more time to talk about different conflicts that are unique and engaging, rather than just being a remake. We can spend much more time reading about the story instead of reading about her learning the magic of nature or something. It makes the story a little more clean cut which isn't bad, but also not the best. It makes it slightly more predictable in the future, and it feels less real, also fast forwards and catch-up paragraphs are never that fun to read. But on the flipside, makes this story stand out from the previous ones and possible future ones to come. I personally like this approach, as I feel re-learning everything again after reading the first book would feel tedious and boring, and there would be no meaning to it, as there is no current interesting conflict that spices up the story. Nothing has really wowed me yet though, i'm enjoying what we've got so far, but i'm really waiting for the stirring of the pot, that's what I think will really add some more color to the story.
I am confused, the second line makes it sound like Star was surprised/confused that Twilight suggested she go see Lotus, despite having earlier said she was already planning doing just that.
Best Line in this chapter!
Descendant of Fluttershy. Totally calling it. How much you wanna bet she's a pegasus?
4539679 A little bit off there but not by much, I think a descendant of both Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash.
Commence read.
Interesting combat stuff. Wonder what other things shall pop up.
Looks like some matchmaking being attempted.
why allways FxF matches ?! my first thought was that Lunas stundent is going to be the one ...
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We haven't seen the last of him either ;)
4542478 good godness why do i have a 3some in mind with him, Star and Night ??!
plz plz make it happen Loyal !
I have been without WiFi for so long, and I finally got to read this! And it was amazing! I want to read more!
I like the skipping of learning, it takes a different turn on the story where learning isn't the main priority for the majority of the story, similar to the first book. It gives the book more time to talk about different conflicts that are unique and engaging, rather than just being a remake. We can spend much more time reading about the story instead of reading about her learning the magic of nature or something. It makes the story a little more clean cut which isn't bad, but also not the best. It makes it slightly more predictable in the future, and it feels less real, also fast forwards and catch-up paragraphs are never that fun to read. But on the flipside, makes this story stand out from the previous ones and possible future ones to come. I personally like this approach, as I feel re-learning everything again after reading the first book would feel tedious and boring, and there would be no meaning to it, as there is no current interesting conflict that spices up the story. Nothing has really wowed me yet though, i'm enjoying what we've got so far, but i'm really waiting for the stirring of the pot, that's what I think will really add some more color to the story.
You don't say that all fucking element descendants are working in a fucking spa? I mean, I do not even have enough fucks to give if it is the case.