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JawJoe


I am a mighty thesaurus. Rawr!

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Like shipping? Hate reading? Look no further!

Everybody's favourite small horse-related romantic relationships, in a thousand words or fewer.

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Comments ( 16 )

What the hell did I just read? This was hilarious!

This is a really short story, yet really f*cking good! :D

It kept me entertained all the way through.

I got only one tthing to say: There are a few spelling errors here and there, but less than few. :D

Overall, really! :D

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Oh, do point those out. I must've gotten sloppy with my proofreading. It happens.

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Immediately hear ears were assaulted by wub-step and dropped-bass and other such music-like things that the new generation liked.

"assaulted hear ears."

And I wasn't quite sure whether you planned to put dash on "dropped-bass" or not.

4404996 I would presume that it's not going to be strictly Octi-scratch.

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Something I did in between working on things I actually take seriously.

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It's my way of dealing with stress.

they had to do it on the table, and on the floor, and wherever you kinky bastards like, in whatever positions small lesbian horses can.

Pure genius.

Someone's been having fun, I see :rainbowwild:

“Still, what makes you think I even bend that way?”

“Everypony bends that way.”

Octavia couldn't deny Vinyl's impeccable logic. She did bend that way. Apparently.

I just.. I... Oh man :rainbowlaugh:
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Just this extra r floating around

“I am not interested in you, your unwashed delinquent,”

And I mean technically this should be plural because you said "parts"

No, this time her hooves took her to the parts of the city she'd never visited: the one with dirty clubs and flashing discos

You aren't taking this seriously and you're aware that you aren't taking this seriously...I like it.

That was... amazingly funny, to say the least. :rainbowlaugh:

Every OctaScratch ever conceived ever. 10/10 manly tears were shed due to awesomeness.

I literally gasped out loud at points of this. I'm not sure how you could write this and not be shamed off the site.

Dammit man I haven't read Twixie in years and you bring it all flooding back.

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