Reluctantly following some royal advice, Rainbow takes a trip to find a pony that may help her in her struggle to accept the past, while Twilight attempts to reconcile with a family member.
My oh my revelations indeed. This is going to take us to some interesting places I imagine. Seems Luna can't help but meddle a bit, wonder if Dash will share that bit of news with Twilight.
Well, I'm strapped in and ready for this ride, hope the rest of you are too.
prevented her from killing herself................
this is an enormous contrast dude. she helped save rainbow dash but murdered rarity............. that makes no sense. i highly, highly doubt Celestia would think it was an accident. she may not walk the realm of dreams, but she has seen a thousand years of life. seriously it makes no damn sense for her to kill rarity. it was needless, cruel, nd against her character. know i am complaining about something from two stories ago but the problem is till there. jsut felt............ forced that she would ensure rarity died rather than figure out what happened. hell, far as she knew, she was influenced by something. \ of all beins it made the least since for luna to condemn another for evil actions.
Not expecting such a move, Rainbow stayed alert, looking all around, preparing to meet at attack from any angle, until her eyes settled back on her copy, now hanging motionless twenty feet above the ground.
Perhaps you mean "an?"
This is the first crossover I ever read. You are popping my crossover cherry. You should feel honored.
“Cadance alerted us that you had tried to use the Crystal Heart while under the protection of your enchanted cloak, convincing yourself that no one loved you. I could not let you end your life in vain.”
How did Cadance even know that it was Rainbow? That was the magic of the cloak, that whoever wears it, is unrecognizable. Also, there's no reason why she contacted Luna specifically if she really knew it was Rainbow, despite the magic of the cloak.
4429343 When Rainbow turned down her offer of shelter, she quickly made a note before the spell wore off. She thought it best to alert someone who could help.
I am a huge fan of Princess Luna's Suicide Solutions and the character of Noctilucent. So i was excited to learn that you were working with kudzuhaiku to do a cross-over from them. I am liking what i am reading so far. Can't wait to see how Noctilucent will be utilized in your story.
4430348 I'm going to try my best, but it was my initial plan to have this take place after the events of Suicide Solutions, and I don't know what you have planned. So there will more than likely be some discrepancies between how I write him and how you write him, and your way will probably be much better.
4430373 I think the biggest difference will be my history of him, and yours, since I'm going to try and use everything you've revealed so far, and you'll probably go on revealing little bits as the story goes on.
I liked that story until the author decided to reveal that Luna had been brainwashed by the elements, which completely ruined it for me. Is the same true here?
4430801 .....kay now i am not giong to read that story. i mean seriously, it makes no sense for the elements to do that. elements balance things out, one could say. she was technically brainwashed to begin with from her corruption, so why brainwash her further?
What story are you talking about? This one doesn't have a brainwashed Luna. Rather she wanted justice for Rainbow Dash and allowed Dashie to act on her greatest desire [technically] inside Rarity's dream. So far the Mistress-Do-Well series spin off by this author is pretty good.
Comment posted by Brony Soprano deleted Sep 17th, 2015
Interesting, cant wait to see were it goes.
oh sweet, crossover fic! In the words of Thor; ANOTHER!
My oh my revelations indeed. This is going to take us to some interesting places I imagine. Seems Luna can't help but meddle a bit, wonder if Dash will share that bit of news with Twilight.
Well, I'm strapped in and ready for this ride, hope the rest of you are too.
prevented her from killing herself................
this is an enormous contrast dude. she helped save rainbow dash but murdered rarity............. that makes no sense. i highly, highly doubt Celestia would think it was an accident. she may not walk the realm of dreams, but she has seen a thousand years of life.
seriously it makes no damn sense for her to kill rarity. it was needless, cruel, nd against her character. know i am complaining about something from two stories ago but the problem is till there. jsut felt............ forced that she would ensure rarity died rather than figure out what happened. hell, far as she knew, she was influenced by something. \
of all beins it made the least since for luna to condemn another for evil actions.
Perhaps you mean "an?"
This is the first crossover I ever read. You are popping my crossover cherry. You should feel honored.
And maybe a little creeped out.
A like and a favorite are compulsory.
KBO.
4427760 I think Rainbow Dash feels the same way, wouldn't you say?
4428111 still feels out of character.
4428149 Everything will make sense.
That OC looks like a clown.
4428309 Shoot, I knew I had a fuck around here somewhere, where'd it go?
I love this world!!
will not deny though, the world is a little intersting. things are being put back in their proper place but nothing is the same regardless.
How did Cadance even know that it was Rainbow? That was the magic of the cloak, that whoever wears it, is unrecognizable. Also, there's no reason why she contacted Luna specifically if she really knew it was Rainbow, despite the magic of the cloak.
4429343 When Rainbow turned down her offer of shelter, she quickly made a note before the spell wore off. She thought it best to alert someone who could help.
4428626 well do let me know when it gets spotted.
4429406 Whatever. The OC is not mine, and I'm just staying true to the description the owner gave me.
I am a huge fan of Princess Luna's Suicide Solutions and the character of Noctilucent. So i was excited to learn that you were working with kudzuhaiku to do a cross-over from them. I am liking what i am reading so far. Can't wait to see how Noctilucent will be utilized in your story.
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When I created him, I was thinking of you...
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I am curious to see how this turns out...
I really hope that certain character traits are preserved.
Noctilucent is in a state of transition, so his character traits aren't fully fleshed out yet.
He is moving towards positivism and a humanist perspective. Well, humanist as it is applied to equines. Equinist? I don't know.
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4430348 I'm going to try my best, but it was my initial plan to have this take place after the events of Suicide Solutions, and I don't know what you have planned. So there will more than likely be some discrepancies between how I write him and how you write him, and your way will probably be much better.
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Just peek into positivism and humanism. You'll do fine.
He is eventually going to take on Luna's militant stance of preserving life at all costs.
4430373 I think the biggest difference will be my history of him, and yours, since I'm going to try and use everything you've revealed so far, and you'll probably go on revealing little bits as the story goes on.
I liked that story until the author decided to reveal that Luna had been brainwashed by the elements, which completely ruined it for me. Is the same true here?
4430801 No, at least I don't think so.
4430801 .....kay now i am not giong to read that story. i mean seriously, it makes no sense for the elements to do that. elements balance things out, one could say. she was technically brainwashed to begin with from her corruption, so why brainwash her further?
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You should give it another chance, keep reading. Zillions of favourites can't be wrong.
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What story are you talking about? This one doesn't have a brainwashed Luna. Rather she wanted justice for Rainbow Dash and allowed Dashie to act on her greatest desire [technically] inside Rarity's dream. So far the Mistress-Do-Well series spin off by this author is pretty good.
4433302 I totally forgot about that story until just now as I reread this one. I miss it
Mustang Springs...never heard that before.