This town used to be his home. Those ponies used to be his friends. That alicorn used to be his mother. That filly used to be his heart. Now everything is only a reminder that he was the one that did this.
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That was pretty depressing, although I am assuming that was the point. Overall, I liked it; It was well-written, I didn't see any major problems with spelling or grammar, all in all it is a very nice, if sad, read.
10/10
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4396997 Thanks for the feedback. Though to be honest this was the first time I tried to do anything like this, so I was just making it up as I went.
4397310 That movie was amazing.
4399943 oink oink.
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why u such good writer fussan-san
4419400 I'm not. I'm honest, and honesty is what makes a story, not fancy words or grammar.
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how do you know that's not what I meant
bye fussan-san
I didn't want this feel. Good story OP.
This is just a sad story. No ponies learning their lesson from their actions fucking someone they love life up or anything just a straight up sadness. Good story even tho I am not a fan of the heart strings that were pulled.
What about the rest of the world?