Alex Mercer has been living in Equestria for a couple of months now. He finally made enough money to buy a house in ponyville. One night he decides to go to the local bar to get his weekly buzz. What he didn't count on is the night ahead of him.
This is a mature story because of the language and suggestive themes.
Also this is my first story. So hate is expected.
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So thus is complete?
Why?
Why is this complete?
You don't end a story like that, it was incomplete earlier, when I added this later!
So thus is complete?
Why?
Why is this complete?
You don't end a story like that, it was incomplete earlier, when I added this later!
Nice story, just don't go and turn the story into a series that turns into a clopfic.
4385536 Dah. School is a bitch, I will create the sequel in a few weeks.
I must confess that I feel like a monster!
That was... vell, stupid. Have a well-deserved thumbs-down.
The basic idea was interesting but pacing nd grammar and blahblah
some people, 20whenever
Can i be honest, it was decent, but i feel like it could use some more work, the pacing, the details, were a bit rushed, but other than that, it was decent, and it may need some more chapters, as many more seem to say the same.
is there going to be a sequel