• Member Since 5th Apr, 2013
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jl7895


Love doesn't discriminate between the sinners and the saints. It takes and it takes and it takes and we keep loving anyway

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Have you ever wondered what it would be like to date a pony? Unfortunately, you won't find out by reading these stories. Instead, you will find a series of stories of humans dating ponies and their experiences. Maybe you can find some closure in one of them.

This is my first attempt at a one-shot. It might become more than a one-shot, but here it is until then.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

This story is amazing! Brings the realism of the criticism of other people when it comes to human x pony.

not bad, decent display of bigotry in society and desire to overcome it.

Not too many human x pony stories actually face the Squick Factor, as TV Tropes calls it, head-on. Nice work.

A nice change of scenery with this story!

I like it how you haven't gone overboard with the making out or such, because the story seems more interesting than that. Development of character first which I'm enjoying!

For a quick write, you've made a decent human/Equestria story, which is hard to do from an originality perspective. I hope you continue!


EDIT:
Coming back the following night, I've just realized that this is a one-shot.
Was tired last night & didn't realise.
Ah well, is still good!

Cool story so far... By the way you're using my name. xP I feel part of the story.

Seriously though, cool story.

"Relationships aren't all about sex,"
"Welcome to America,"

A very well-done story - huzzah!!!!! (Octavia happens to be my favorite mare, and it was refreshing to read a story outside the usual fanfic Tavi/Vinyl sort of thing.)

The phone call really did sound like something two teenagers in high school would say to each other.

You know what I'm talking about the whole 'teens drenched in hormones, that half the time don't even know what there talking about' thing.
The kind that spout "I love you" every few sentences because that's the only way they know how to express affection.
I HATE THEM

anyway this was a good story....also

Relationships don’t have to be about sex.

YES. YES THEY DO. It's the reason why long distance relationships don't work.

There is not enough Human x Octavia done.

You know it's gonna have to happen eventually. How about Lyra next?

Wouldn't mind seeing Luna in one of these

Woooo!!! Best pony has arrived!!
Well best pone of the mane 6 at least

Why yes!
I enjoyed it and had a better night thanks to you!

How about...Derpy? That would be cute.

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