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AboveTail


Recent Addition to the herd. Been going through a rough time and the optimism of the pony world really helped.

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Zabuza Momochi, also known as the Demon of the Hidden Mist. After his final climactic battle with Team 7 on the bridge, Zabuza expected to spend the rest of eternity being tortured in hell. Instead, he is sent to a land of candy colored talking horses, a distinct lack of mercenary jobs, and to top it all off, the Princess expects him to start sending friendship reports to her every week!

On second thought...maybe this is hell.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

I'm definitely interested in seeing what sort of comedic gold you can mine out of this scenario. Please hurry with the next chapter so I can see just where you're going with this.

As long as you don't turn him into a sissy.

Now this seems interesting!

‘Cake for killing Kakashi. Awesome.’

The cake is a lie Zabuza.

Zabuza. With ponies. This promises to be very entertaining. Can't wait for more!

This is kinda funny so far, and has the potential to become more comedic. Try a few more chapters, see how it goes.

My only complaint about this so far, is that when Zabuza cried over Haku, you forgot to add his words "your words cut deep, deeper than any blade." before he got Naruto's kunai. Otherwise, I'm really liking this. Does Zabuza still have his Kubikiriocho or not?

Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha!Yes!oh man,when is the next chapter coming out?:

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Yeah, he does. And it surprises him. You should all be happy to know that I'm currently at work on the next chapter and from there, I'm going to try and plan out where this story is going to go from there.

don't die on meeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!

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