“Fill up my tummy, please. Every last drop. Every last little piece. Give me it all. Master!”
HOW IS THIS TEEN
"Double-sided vibrators"? Yep, not teen
"Twilight scooched her chair closer. Her hoof wandered along the table over towards Spike's paw. "More like... something right." :l not sure if "run spike"
Good story! Kinda funny. Only thing that jumped at me was: "Twilight zoned out for a moment, feeling glad to finally have her mind totally content with Y.C.T.B. She felt the book from inside the saddlebag underneath her, but the urge to take it had vanished. Ah... I guess now is as good as time as any to go through the mail. She glanced over at a bookshelf and magically lifted the things over. The letters looked pretty unimportant, but the package picked her curiously a little bit."
It's towards the end. I think the word you were going for was "piqued".
Reads last part of chapter ... This is gonna be another one of THOSE twilight/spike fics isn't it? *grumble* ...hatched him herself... *grumble* ...like a mother to him... *grumble* *grumble* ...part of "baby" dragon they don't understand... *grumble*
I'm enjoying everything else so far. Kind of fun to see how Twilight's fears about her own desires are expelled after she talks to a good friend. I'd be lying if I said I didn't have a similar experience last year.
You are a bonder?” Rarity squealed. -- Oh dear god there's a term for them...
*continues reading* Team Jack Bolt? TEAM JACK BOLT!!! SON OF A B!TCH! Why??? Of anything you could've used, why why why why!?!?!?! A gay orgy is less gay than that trash!
Congratulations, Twilight. You have been indoctrinated. Now break out of it by choosing to shoot the giant red container, rather than grabbing the blue pylons or jumping into the green light.
Stop updating I have to do Math Analysis!
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Yeah, that was fast... And it is really a yaoi version of Twilight. Two kinds of stereotypical fans mixed.
Dat last line!
So is this a mix between books? When I read the first chapter and it had hooves holding an apple I thought it was twilight but now I'm confused
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we've been found out! play me off, johnny!
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No story updates, go read and track more new stories, suddenly they all upload at once and you're screwed
I hope to have the next chapter done by tomorrow morning-ish. Also, there's about three chapters left before the story ends. I think.
Thanks everyone for reading!
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“Fill up my tummy, please. Every last drop. Every last little piece. Give me it all. Master!”
HOW IS THIS TEEN
"Double-sided vibrators"?
Yep, not teen
"Twilight scooched her chair closer. Her hoof wandered along the table over towards Spike's paw. "More like... something right."
:l not sure if "run spike"
A yaoi parody of the Twilight saga, and yet it is still less gay than the actual Twilight.
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You are correct, good sir or madam!
666 views when I read this chapter. Pony hell here I come!
Good story! Kinda funny. Only thing that jumped at me was:
"Twilight zoned out for a moment, feeling glad to finally have her mind totally content with Y.C.T.B. She felt the book from inside the saddlebag underneath her, but the urge to take it had vanished. Ah... I guess now is as good as time as any to go through the mail. She glanced over at a bookshelf and magically lifted the things over. The letters looked pretty unimportant, but the package picked her curiously a little bit."
It's towards the end. I think the word you were going for was "piqued".
spike better start running
Reads last part of chapter
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This is gonna be another one of THOSE twilight/spike fics isn't it?
*grumble* ...hatched him herself... *grumble* ...like a mother to him... *grumble* *grumble* ...part of "baby" dragon they don't understand... *grumble*
AWESOME sequel title
>Ponynet?
>pPad?
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I'm enjoying everything else so far. Kind of fun to see how Twilight's fears about her own desires are expelled after she talks to a good friend. I'd be lying if I said I didn't have a similar experience last year.
You are a bonder?” Rarity squealed. -- Oh dear god there's a term for them...
*continues reading* Team Jack Bolt? TEAM JACK BOLT!!! SON OF A B!TCH! Why??? Of anything you could've used, why why why why!?!?!?! A gay orgy is less gay than that trash!
Congratulations, Twilight. You have been indoctrinated. Now break out of it by choosing to shoot the giant red container, rather than grabbing the blue pylons or jumping into the green light.
Those last few sentences where she comes onto Spike made me gag.