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SwiperTheFox
This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.
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Oh my yes. Yes indeed.
*Marks for later* I'll be back :P
Although at first I was like what..
This is beautifully written.
Ill be watching you sir.
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Spike is the author, right?
It has to be, just HAS TO BE. That would be way to fucking
funny to pass up.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
im not sure if i should continue or not....................
I hate you for making me love this
This is just... I can't describe how good it is, the 'boys kissing boys' hypnotizing part.
Poor frigid unloved Twilight!
We all know who the author is unless there is a massive red herring... and was that cover meant to be like a certain other famous cover of bestselling trash?
I FUCKING LOVE YOU
Ummm... well... I can't say I really liked this one, I thought it was going to be
A reference to the movie "twilight" and was highly surprised when I found out the main character
Was a colt.
I think if I do continue reading this story, ill have to skip over the parts when twilight is reading
So... either the author is as obvious as it seems if you look at that name in the right way, or we're going to get a big surprise. Not sure which I'd prefer. Very good story though
Many lulz were had, well done.
Can't wait for chapter 2!
Thanks for all the comments guys! I hope to have chapter 2 up by tonight!
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Ms. E. I. Xirt.
...As much as I repeat that name, I can't get it. I know, I just know it has something behind it. Is it the pronounciation, or a play-on-words of a pony's name?!
THE CURIOSITY KILLS ME.
Also, that cover is the best cover ever in the history of story covers.
EDIT: OH FUCK!
I just realized what the name meant...
Man. That's a pretty big twist.
This story is twenty different types of win rolled up into a burrito and dunked in rainbows.
I haven't touched the story, and I think I know who the author is.
I'm really just drawn here because of your cover image.
Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have my theory who is the author
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I'm with Twilight on this.
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On a side note:
"Ms. E. I. Xirt"
Miss Sparkle if I may direct your attention to the closest dictionary.
In the rare case of one not being found within you immediate vicinity you should locate Sweetie Belle. Now, if you have either a dictionary or the young unicorn at hoof you should look up the word anagram.
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Or get a mirror.
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But is the anagram correct or just an intentional misdirection by the true author? That remains to be seen.
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Can't unsee facial similarity...
OH My God! I know who the author is
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Joshua Waits (Michael Stephenson) and David Bowie?
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HMMMM. I WONDER WHO IT COULD BE.
This will be very, horribly good.
dashie knows?
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Manure seems to have become a reality indeed.
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Twilight wants spikes dick and Rainbow Dash knows whats going down.
This shit is most definitely getting REAL
boss, one or two grammar errors but nothing big
An update a day, this is too good. Maybe Twi can get some help from her mama Rarity or something.
- it's possible, but then I'm just saying 
And... I'm a girl, and I find it quite easy to stop if I'm very alert for someone approaching
Stop updating I have to do Math Analysis!
three weeks ago
Yeah, that was fast... And it is really a yaoi version of Twilight. Two kinds of stereotypical fans mixed.
Oh Twilight. Only very naughty ponies think about what their little brother and his filly get up to.
Dat last line!
So is this a mix between books? When I read the first chapter and it had hooves holding an apple I thought it was twilight but now I'm confused
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wait a second... didn't you post the very same reaction image on a story from totallynotabrony?
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we've been found out! play me off, johnny!
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No story updates, go read and track more new stories, suddenly they all upload at once and you're screwed
I hope to have the next chapter done by tomorrow morning-ish. Also, there's about three chapters left before the story ends. I think.
Thanks everyone for reading!
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"Tentative book singing"
Oh, Sweetie Belle...
So that's why the CMC just got hit with more chores in Hearts And Hooves Day; daterape potions are perfectly legal, if I understand Equestrian legalese correctly.
SwiperTheFox,
I need to congratulate you on your skilled preservation of characterization in this story. It's all too common that silly borderline clop like this throws the personalities of the Mane six et al. to the wind and has them act or think in whatever way tickles the author's fancy. Up until chapter 4 of this book, I thought you had done just this. Thankfully, I was wrong.
My main concern was with the lust Twilight felt for Spike. The show establishes the relationship between these two characters pretty clearly; They love each other as brother and sister. The first four chapters seemed to almost ignore that Twilight is contemplating incest. The fifth, of course, shows that Spike has eyes only for Sweetie Belle, understands the gravity of what Twilight asks, and turns her down gently. This demonstrates to the reader that we are not in a universe not too different from the canon one, and that Twilight has been driven to great distraction. I've seen other author's handle this relationship far worse, so your delicacy is commendable.
However my remaining doubt is with the way Twilight deals with her budding (exploding?) sexuality. Why does she never attempt to use books (other than the one) to understand what's going on with her? Surely she owns a work on pony sexuality? Even more odd is her almost total lack of real introspection. Again and again in the TV show we find that Twilight is a character that is capable of reckoning with herself and her feelings; here, not so much.
However, after your skillful course correction with the incest I have little doubt you can assuage the other concerns of this reader. Thumbs up.
Sincerely,
Note: This review written at the author's request. I'm more than happy to do a similar examination of your story.
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Yeah, there's a lot of proofreading type things I need to correct in this chapter.
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Yeah, I wrote the section as sort of a parody of the things that I've see in law and economics classes. But, yep, it's totally legal to do magical lovey-dovey things. (As per the show's canon, then). The CMC didn't do jail time or anything that serious, and neither would the Y.C.T.B. author.
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Thanks!
The Great and Powerful Trixie's secret eh?
I feel dumb for not catching onto the pen-name earlier now. . .
I've just read the first two lines and "the Hoofington library system was just going to shred all these so-called ‘unwanted’ books. Shred them. Seriously!"
I truly and honestly know how bad of an Idea it is to keep a book when the Library is willing to shred them. When I was 13 I asked my schools librarian if I could keep some of the books they were planning on destroying, they said yes. I later found myself reading a book where a man guts his own brother than used the intestines to kill his daughter.
Now back to the story.
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This is in part based on my experience as part of homeschooled co-operatives in West Chicago, where we would take old school-related material and other ex-library books and shift through things to give to low-income familes that need educational material. (So, I'm glad Twilight is doing what she's doing).
But I can totally see your point as well.
"an image of two pale white hooves holding a bright red apple" You tricked me with the title, I'm impressed.
"Boys
Kissing
Boys" I read that in the voice of Alan Rickmen
Also 402123 has a great point if you still haven't planned the ending you might want to roll with this.