My Little Pony: Friendship is a Magical Series of Short Stories

by ShikimaAkemi

5 What's so interesting anyway?

What's so interesting anyway?

A beautiful day in Ponyville's market, with fresh food, and lovely stuff.
Fluttershy was on her way back to her cottage, when she heard a gasp close to her; turning to her right, she saw Pinkie Pie, mouth agape, eyes as tiny dots, a pointing hoof to the front sky.

Concerned, Fluttershy trotted next to her friend, waved a hoof in front of her, even tried to talk to her… nothing, Pinkie's gaze was fixed on the direction she was pointing at.

Intrigued now, Fluttershy decided to follow her friend's eyes, trying to figure out what she was looking at so intensely.
As if that was her cue, Pinkie drew a mischievous grin on her face. As fast as light, she turned to the side where Fluttershy was, and gave a peek on the shy pegasus cheek, whose reaction was a cute squeak, sinking herself in the ground, covering her deep-red face with her front hooves and wings, while Pinkie giggled and patted her on the head.

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[EddWar]

[Fritzy]

Intrigued now, Fluttershy decided to follow her friend's eyes, trying to figure out what she was looking at so intensely. As if that was her cue, Pinkie drew a mischievous grin on her face. As fast as light, she turned to the side where Fluttershy was, and gave a peek on the shy pegasus cheek, whose reaction was a cute squeak, sinking herself in the ground, covering her deep-red face with her front hooves and wings, while Pinkie giggled and patted her on the head.

“peck”, I think. Also, it wouls seem that you’re incapable of writing longer stories that don’t involve Twidash, from my observation.

[ShikimaAkemi]

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Thank you for the correction on the "peck" word, it helps me since English is not my natural language.

Also, and I'm not intending a confrontation here, but that last comment of yours seems very rude, don't you think?
Consider that you're comunicating through text here, so you need to be careful with your words' choosing, because, what you write, may sound nice and polite in your head, but it could be misinterpreted by the person who reads it.
I do have the hability to write long or short stories in different topics, in fact, taking the shortest ones was my challenge at that moment, since I always write stories with at least two or more chapters, here I wasattempting to do something that was a complete story, but as short as possible, without losing coherency; also, keep in mind, this is fanwork, wich I do not get paid for, I do what I enjoy, and what I love the most is Twidash, I do write about some other ships/characters I like, but it is when and IF I want and/or have the tine, so nothing forces me to make something bigger about the others if I do not want to, plus, I explained that thsoe last three chapters were written in one single day, all of them, to share during the special months, becuase I had no time to transcribe the longer stuff I have.

Thank you again for checking up my shor stories, I hope that you enjoy the new ones if you come back.

[ShikimaAkemi]

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