Just where has life gone? To think that 7 years ago I created an account just to read fan fics. Then I wrote one. Then two. Now its been 4 years silent.
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A thousand years ago, and Luna isn't Nightmare moon yet. But, how long will that last? What would it take to make her change her mind
Note, I've linked the pic to the place where I got it out of respect for the creator of this piece.
I'm also not really sure on what tags would fit this. I guess it will be an experience for everyone who reads it. This fic is also going to be massively edited in the future to make it better.
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Woah... Cool story I really liked :)
4302450 Thanks. Theres still a lot of work that needs to be done to it though.
4302700 oh okay :) this story is still cool in my opinion cx
4302736 Thanks
4302742 your welcome
Is that all?
4305734 Sadly yes. I am working on a much larger fic at the moment and I wrote this purely because of how long it was taking me to write a single chapter for this new fic. That being because I have several chapters planned and each will near 10k words if it works out correctly.
This story was added to Short Stories in the <1,000 words category, but the word count is longer than 1,000 words. Is there something I'm not understanding? (I'd be willing to put it in another category, but I don't know what genre it is.)
4308869 Sorry. I guess I have my math symbols back words. Figured I was right since you can't have a story with less than 1000 words unless you submitted then took away from the story itself.
4308893 What genre do you want your story to go under?
4308901 I'm not even sure what genre this fic would fall under.
4308906 I'll go with my instincts. This story feels Sad to me.
4308915 Ok. Thanks
A fair story, but there are a few grammatical mistakes that were easy to miss:
For starters, I think you mean 'perfect' in this sentence "...ponies a prefect time to..."
I think it's supposed to be "we're" in this sentence, "...interested in the night were sitting in currently."
" Except" should be "accept."
You could remove the "A" and have "tears" as the start in this sentence, "A tears started..."
Some of the 'to' s in the work should be 'too' s. For example, instead of, "It's to dark for for hoping around!" it should be, "It's too dark for hopping around."
Don't mean to sound like a grammar Nazi, but I thought it might help.
4470022 Thanks for showing me some of my mistakes. I wrote this in a short period of time so I was bound to make quiet a few mistakes.