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But, we're the good guys..

The Cutie Mark Crusaders are still looking to find their talents, but after Discord decides to pop in and help them they realise, what if they aren't the good guys?

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Going down the List · 26th Apr 2014 · 1,060 words
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Change it Up · 26th Apr 2014 · 1,085 words
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SeekerVonYuki

SeekerVonYuki #1 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · · Change it Up ·

OMG! THIS IS GREAATTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Squeaks in delight!* I was waiting for this to happened for a long time! XD
anyways, keep on writing, i want to see whats gonna happen!

SwornBlade

SwornBlade #2 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · · Change it Up ·

Thank you!!

Pixiepop

Pixiepop #3 · May 7th, 2014 · · · Going down the List ·

The ending was a little abrupt, but i like the direction you took this in, with Discord being the narrator, that was (for lack of a better word) really really cool

SwornBlade

SwornBlade #4 · May 7th, 2014 · · · Change it Up ·

4352321 thanks! Any suggestions? Just a warning the next chapters gonna be quite grimdark, it's the CMC ( Corrupted Minds Corps ) learning to use their powers on a couple of - friends so to speak. But if there's anywhere you'd like to see this go please PM me.

Murder Knight

Murder Knight #5 · May 7th, 2014 · · · Change it Up ·

Hmm. There are several flaws in this otherwise nice story. Don't get me wrong, the story is pretty good, but the errors would put off a lot of people. Try calling in an editor.

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