Earth. A place in which everything is perfect. At least, that's what the legend says.
Twilight Sparkle and her friends are going to learn everything is not how it seems. They've called it many names before, but all of them mean the same thing. Utopia.
Entering Earth, Twilight and her friends find out that they couldn't be more wrong about it.
Good i'll keep an eye on this
4239831 Good to know you like it!!
Interesting
Looking forward to more of this! /)
Interesting premise, I like it.
You sir, have my interest
Great Story So Far, Keep It Up!
4291153 Aww, thank you!
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please, get an editor or a proof reaer.....
i guess english isn`t your native language?
4514422 I will try to get one of then. And no, English is my third language, and I'm not quite used to it yet.
And so Pinkie jinxed it.
Lol, the title of your story looks a lot like one of mine.
4518918 Lol. Being completely honest, this idea came to mine while I was reading your story. So, uh, thank you?
4521448 Wow! I'm glad I've been able inspire you. It's very cool to know that my stories can Influence someone that much! Thank you for making me feel a lot more confident!
Have those moustaches
4521448 And all those yays