This story is a Pokémon crossover. I'm aware some of you aren't into that kind of story, so if not, you are NOT required to read this. Leave now if you already know you won't enjoy this. This also isn't a Human in Equestria fic with "human" replaced by "Pokémon."
Imagine waking up in a hospital to find out that you've been transported to an alternate dimension, and have a completely different body. It sounds awful, but it's reality for an unlucky Pokémon called Flygon. She finds herself in a land of talking, colorful horses and magic, a land she wants to get out of as soon as possible. But finding her way back to her own world won't be as easy as it seems. And if Flygon DOES manage to make it back to her dimension, things might just get even worse.
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not bad !
hmm this is actually good so far will fav and wait for more and hope this doesnt get cancelled like so many other fucking stories i fav
Hahaha! XD
I like!
why does a Pokemon have an inter-dimensional portal device? they might as well rule the god damn world if i weren't for pokeballs.
doctor horse?
that the best thing you could have come up with? 
5170405 That's his canonical name (the doctor in Read it and Weep). As dumb as it is, that's what I'm using. I'd appreciate it if you wouldn't leave baseless insults without researching first.
5170361 Backstories. Spoilers. Shush.
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sorry, that was a bad call on my end. i haven't seen Read It and Weep in such a long time. 
yay update i dont even remembered at first i had faved this story until like halfway in
anyway good chapter good story
now i have to go bulbapedia to find out which pokemon flygon is
5170361 Well, for one, inter dimensional traveling doesn't mean you can rule your own world.
Secondly, this story plot was made when he/she just started writing a fanfiction (he's just rewriting/editing it and putting it here), so this is his/her (no offence, I'm not sure) first story plot to be ever written on the internet. You should excuse some of the weird ideas he/she got when writing this ( a.k.a. Flygon's a mechanical genius).
Um... Did Doctor Horse say two months? 'Cause he clearly said two weeks.
5225803 If you ever played Pokemon, it's a mostly dark and light green Pokemon with red eyes and diamond-shaped wings and long tail.
5225943 You're half-correct there. When I first wrote The Rift, it was just "Flygon is a genius and made a portal machine, don't ask." However, didn't I say I'd improve on all the flaws in the original plot?
In this version, there's a reason why Flygon was able to make the Dimension Skipper, not just because she was smart. I don't wanna spoil anything, though, so you'll just have to hang tight for now.
5225970 Whoops. Lemme go fix that...
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yep checked it i actually thought it was that weird dinosaur with leaf wings
not the dragon creature that evolved from an ant eater lol
5226316 Point taken.
By the way, Timmy was the nickname I always gave my first Pokemon (usually Mudkip) whenever I replayed Pokemon Ruby. I was bored.
Oh, another error.
*wind
5227240 Thanks. My Spell-Check didn't pick up on that one.
Found another error. Huh. Might want to check it personally next time.
*supposed
5229229 Okay, let's talk.
I appreciate the help with the typos, but please don't keep leaving commemts only serving to point them out. If you want to be my proofreader, just ask. I don't currently have one; I use Spell-Check. My Spell-Check doesn't pick up on errors that are the correct spelling of another word. In all honesty, I had noticed every single typo you pointed out before you did. I didn't fix them because I didn't think people would be so nitpicky. Almost every single story on this site has typos, even ones by famous fanfic-writers. Again, I appreciate the help, but it's a bit redundant. Like I said, if you want to be my proofreader, just ask.
5232271 Sorry if I annoyed you. I (still) suspect myself of having OCD.
I'm not sure about being a proofreader though. My schedule, more often than not, will be slightly unexpected.
Three reasons: One being me still in school (this school likes to give announcements at the last minute) and another being my family's social circle being very big (don't ask, one word: fate), the third being... Well, coincidences. The reason for me having so much free time now is because it's the school holidays (on my end, at least).
Any other reasons would sum up to one word: experience. Especially on a website. I have proofread my friends' makeshift books (they called it a journal for "public" reading) before though.
I would like to, though and in the long run, I still have free time (I can't even make any stories, let alone a good one, cursed lack of imagination). So maybe. Still not entirely sure though (how does it work here anyway?).
5233635 I'm okay if you are busy a lot of the time. I am, too. Basically, I'd PM or e-mail (whichever works the best for you) a rough draft of a chapter, and you could help me to point out all the errors. I'd credit you, of course.
5235010 Ok, but what's PM? I never got to know what it means.
5235085 It stands for Private Messages. The little envelope button on the top is where you can send/receive them.
I'd go with e-mail then. I think I would miss that small button. An e-mail would have a big notification right on my lock screen.
5235166 Alright then. Can you give me your email? I'll message you once I'm working on a new chapter.
5235182 Um... If I post it here, that would mean... Yeah...
(Sorry about the deleted messages)
Edit: Is there a way to post it without others seeing the email address?
(I'm conscious of internet safety, not meaning you though)
damn is it her time of the month or something? she hostile for no real reason
5241891 I don't know who you're talking about. I also don't approve of that kind of talk, even if it's in a joking manner.
5242043 twilight, came off as hostile and rude and even had the first person Flygon met that was basically her friend turn 180 on her from ''lets fly together'' to ''im about to knock you smooth out''
...u watch south park?
5242109 While writing this, I imagined Twilight being suspicious of Flygon from the start, due to the unknown energy. She struck up some friendly conversation just so she could see whether Flygon was acting odd or not. Because of Flygon's vague answers, she decided that Flygon was, indeed, suspicious. That was when she brought up the energy; no point in staying friendly any longer. As for Rainbow Dash, she had no idea the pony she rescued wasn't normal, and Twilight didn't tell her otherwise. We all know Dash is easily influenced by things.
And yes, I do watch South Park. It's among my favorite TV shows.
5242132 well kudos then because you did just that
I do hope to see more, it is very well written considering other stories of the like I have seen before, and it would be a shame if there wasn't.
It is also unique in the fact that the ponies do not immediately trust this strange newcomer.
Carry on old chap, I will be watching.
Rainbow Dash, Renbodash, same thing, right guys?
Right?
Silly Flygon, didn't you know that Equestria is mainly inhabitated by multi-colored ponytas.
Oh Flygon, you have no idea what you just got yourself into by agreeing to be Twilight's lab rat (shivers)
This is the best pokemon crossover I've read so far, thx for posting this I can't wait to see more
, I also like how Flygons mane is similar to Gardevoir's 
Please come back!
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I enjoyed reading the original story on fanfiction a while back, so im glad to be reading it again.
im sad this is cancelled i liked it
Why did you avoid mentioning Flygon's name in this chapter?
This story has one of my favourite "waking up after transformation" scenes. I love how you focused on not just Flygon's appearance, but her perceptions, too.