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MysticStoryThePegasus


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The Pilot, off on one of her little schemes, runs into the Doctor. Well, not really, more like she had been following him for awhile. Then something happens.
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A little thing that I thought of when making a picture of 'The Queen Of Years' (as a pony) singing the song 'Wake Up'.
I had this idea, and yadda.
A one-shot. My first ACTUAL one-shot.
Oh, and I view Twilight as being Clara. And RD as Amy, Pinkie as....Uhm......Fluttershy as Donna, and Rarity as Martha.
And Ditzy as Rose.
'Cause it fits.

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Could use some work here and there but its okay.

Try to write in paragraphs first of all.

Get an editor.

Use proper formatting and indentation

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Sorry, but with me being so busy and stuff, I don't have time to find an editor. :ajsleepy:
Oh, and writing this at 9:00 P.M leaves me little time to edit them myself, and I usually come up with better ideas when I'm half asleep, otherwise I'm doing something else and trying to relax over the weekend. Oh, and....Did I mention that my computer keyboard is broken? :facehoof:
That might be the cause of it. :twilightsheepish:
Edit:
Oh, and I'm sorry if what I said seem rude, I just get a bit moody when I'm half asleep.
Again, sorry if that seemed rude..

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Well, everyone.
And Pilot.
Well, everyone except the Doctor.

4225073 Take to long too get an editor? Join this group and post a thread, It'll take you about one minute tops.

4239965 stay out of this and listen to me and listen to me straight this isn't your conversation and plus she needs to go to school and stuff so therefore she didn't have time to get a editor and she's proud of her work and so am I so she doesn't need a editor have I made my self clear? Good

I will read this. Indeed, I will.

Didn't have to be ditzy. It could have been pinkie. MANE 6!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiegasp:

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