Spike has reached that age, the age every dragon ends up undergoing the Cryssaling. unfortunately, Twilight finds out late, over tea no less, and now must sit and watch as Princess Luna Guids him through the process
Chapters (9)
storm the castle
Joined 29th May, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- storm the castle · 37k words · 60 1 · 2k views
- Maxi6 · 1.3k words · 64 0 · 3.2k views
- B_25 · 39k words · 56 11 · 2.2k views
- DinoDenver · 17k words · 39 3 · 1.9k views
- Maneiac · 14k words · 70 15 · 2.6k views
- Black Hailstorm · 49k words · 98 2 · 4k views
- Peridork · 2.7k words · 28 2 · 1.3k views
- Slywolf930 · 17k words · 40 1 · 1.2k views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.155 seconds
Total duration
955 users online
1,476,504 hits today, 2,724,632 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I liked this. Especially the part where Spike called Luna hot. That was funny.
“She told me they eat gems?”
Got a damn good laugh out of that one
This was the best. Dude, you writte very well.
Now, more chapters, or, sequel.
Good story. It either needs more chapters or a sequel. I also happen to be in the same boat as Spike, Luna is hot
Loved this story! Hoping for a sequel!
needs a sequel, more Luna/Spike action
What the?
Oh, lightning corresponds to fire.
For a second, I thought you were pulling a Spyro on me.
Well this is fun. Work on the spacing and that all really.
Time to keep reading
!
I too look forward to a follow up to this. Maybe have it be about every ponies reactions to his new formed abilities. Regardless I look forward to seeing your Mane 6 interact with this newer Spike. Hopefully in the way I expect them to. (Where fun times are had by all)
4228454 Thanks! there will actually be three more in the series, and the next one does indeed zero around his interactions with his friends and neighbors since the change. i've already got it pretty much set in, but i love outside input, so as long as it isnt sexual lemme hear it.
4224133 could you elaborate on that?
4216568 thanks alot!
4228551 well I was thinking of the typical 'Rarity sees Spike as a handsome young dragon now' and have the others join in. Have the other girls comment on Spike's appearance, all the while Rarity gets more and more uncomfortable with the others looking at "her" Spike. Including the CMC.
While having a second chapter that shows the other side, with Rainbow teaching Twilight and Spike how to fly. Rainbow starts to get flirty with Spike (knowing that he has taken more of an interest in females), and Twilight doesn't very much like somepony getting so close to "her" Spike. Only for Spike to pick up on Rainbow's actions and starts flirting back causing the two to recoil at his actions (maybe have Spike grab and kiss Rainbow's hoof, and have him grab Twilight's hoof stare deep into her eyes, and then kiss her on the cheek, then have him thank both of them for caring so much about him before he flies down to meet the rest leaving two very flustered mares in the afternoon sky.
Something like that. Not so much shippy or explicit but REALLY playful.
I've seen that mirror somewhere else before...
Yes...just yes
4222780 Explain, please?
Because I dont get it.
4360447 Spyro can should lightning, fire, earth, ice, and darkness (although that was a weird magic taint on him) from his face. I thought spike was doing the same thing, getting purple dragon (Spyro) powers. I'm glad he didn't, and I understand that lightning can burn and instantly set things ablaze.
Celestia is actualy incapable of such whitout the elements of harmony.
Ha, that bit with him finding Luna-gon hot is the best bit out of this entire fic so far. Luna being flustered about his naughty dreams is gold too.
Pretty good. I personally dislike the implication that it is one in a million chance for a dragon to choose friends over hoard, but that is just me disliking the concept of an entire race of complete egoist. And I will forever cling to the idea that we've only met a few dragons and most of them were teenagers, who are notoriously stupid and can be really mean.
I'll have to see if you truly have made a sequel, I will probably like that even more than this, as I'm not much for the really grim stuff.
Have a like.
OH MY GOD. that is the funniest thing I have ever read
It's interning
Great, just what we need. Dragon puberty.
4360447
The Legend of Spyro. Look it up.
Why do I not like this?
10638688
You just replied to a 7 year old comment. Please don't do that.
Hah! I love it!!