It's Spike's 17th birthday and everyone is invited!
Upon blowing the candles, Spike receives a gift that speaks only to him. He decides to ignore it, however, until he starts doing things he would never do before.
The girls notice Spike's odd behavior, and confront him.
Shout out to Vexy & Monsieur Connoisseur for helping edit this.
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Aha! I see what you did there! You just earned a like, my good sir!
Huh... okay then. This is interesting. I'll be following this.
Neat, not too many stories with Spike fighting against his baser instincts.
Gotta love Pinkie logic
Da Sonic reference.
Just a couple hiccups I picked out, but it was a delight to read.
Really liked it and can't wait for more!
Up-vote and track for you, good sir.
6575978 Thanks for catching those; I'll go correct them. Expect a new chapter soon enough!
Next chapter?
his what? fanny?
6716222 Lol! Thanks for the catch.
Strange how his own mother didn't attend his birthday but I enjoyed this, been a while since I read anything ponies, excited for more.
Huh, neat.
Well this was a very strange and confusing chapter. The buck is going on? I await more.
Yeah..., much editing needed.
Let us know when that's done, ok?!
This is clawsome hehehe
7015055 Thank you for the support. It may be enough to get me to fix this tale of mine.
Personally I really like this chapter and want to know where this power come from and who's in Spike's head.
See the thing I'm trying to figure out is if what's happening to spike has to do with his wish and I love how just cause spike said his wish has to do with all six of then their minds went straight to it being really bad
I guess Carmel couldn't HANDLE the heat
I'll just leave now
Jojo?
7254478 How did you know?!
7240804 I guess I'll have to join you cause that fight was electric
A few errors but honestly a good chapter, I'll be reading more.
You're doing great my friend, keep it up. you got some serious skill.
Interesting, you have my attention.
Hmm....not sure his friends and family would treat him like that but it's your story.
Very great interaction with Spike and Dash, very in character.
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This is what I'm thinking when that wind thing popped up. But it's a good type of wtf.
Why did u cancel it y?
