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Prologue514 words
In which the Sonic trio head out to Ponyville636 words
In which the Sonic Trio and Twilight arrive at Ponyville450 words
In which the Sonic Trio and Twilight encounter an Unfortunate Problem350 words
In Which the Sonic Trio and Twilight set out to find Celestia483 words
In which the Sonic Trio and the Mane 6 go into the Everfree664 words
In which the Mane 6 and the Sonic Trio encounter their first obstacle446 words
In which we get a History Lesson304 words
In which the Mane 6 and the Sonic trio finally make Plans343 words
In which the Mane 6 and the Sonic Trio encounter their Second Problem301 words
In which we all ask "What just happened?!"107 words
In which the Mane 6 and the Sonic Trio enter the Castle1,269 words
In which the Mane 6 and the Sonic Trio meet a Bumbling Idiot457 words
In which the Mane 6 and the Sonic Trio look for the Elements613 words
In which the Mane 6 and the Sonic Trio get another Problem558 words
Note!67 words
In which Rainbow tells the first part of her Tale305 words
In which Rainbow tells her Tale1,025 words
In which our Travelers find a Oddly Bat-Winged Creature530 words
In which our Explorers head to who Knows Where417 words
In which a Certain Shady Stallion gets Busted488 words
In which there is a Pleasant Surprise252 words

In which we all ask "What just happened?!"

Celestia stood up, wings outstretched, stance wide.

"You! How dare you even confront me!" She snarled.

"Oh dear Celestia, so good to see you." The stallion purred, sickly sweet.

"And you!" Celestia said, turning to Nightmare Moon's shadow cloud,"You corrupted my sister, then let go of her at the last second! And worse yet, you possessed me! And work with him!"

"Now, now, settle down dear." The stallion said,"Or I will have to make you."

"What!?"

The stallion's horn pulsed with energy, the glowed an ominous shade of red...

Author's Note:

A little spoiler for the next, REALLY long chapter that will come out tomorrow. Sorry, being a little bit lazy today. Thanks guys, and Solarflare (of course! Can't forget my editor!)!

Rainstorm, out.

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Commander Rainstorm

Commander Rainstorm #1 · Apr 16th, 2014 · · ·

Sorry, again, quite lazy.
Still, hope it keeps the suspense up!

PoisonedIvy

PoisonedIvy #2 · Apr 16th, 2014 · · ·

4243667 hmmmmmm =_=

PoisonedIvy

PoisonedIvy #3 · Apr 16th, 2014 · · ·

THIS SHORT!

More.....

Commander Rainstorm

Commander Rainstorm #4 · Apr 17th, 2014 · · ·

4245242
A ridiculously long chapter will come out tomorrow, so hope you can wait that long!
Still, glad you enjoy this story!

Dashieluvzcandy

Dashieluvzcandy #5 · Apr 17th, 2014 · · ·

This is quite a short chapter but don't worry you get at least one chapter done everyday, I normally only get one done when I feel like it. Sometimes I will take a break for one day and during the day I will get heaps of new ideas and incorporate them into my story the next day. Looking forwards for your next chapter!

Commander Rainstorm