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Commander Rainstorm


Life isn't about waiting for the Storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the Rain.

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Rainbow Dash and her two sisters, Rainstorm and Solarflare, thought they were normal. A ordinary rookie flight team, seeking access to the Wonderbolts. To bad "aunt" Celestia found out that they were destined to-oh wait! Sorry! No spoilers!

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 122 )

I like it...never heard of dashy having sisters:rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy:

Ha ha Twilight has a lot of rules! Awesome story! Love it how Dashie has sisters in this fanfic! :rainbowdetermined2:

I like where this is going.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: However, it needs to be spaced out a little more.:twilightsheepish: And try adding a little bit more of detail to boost the word count to 1000.:twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: But, I still love this story!:heart::heart::yay:

I need more of this awesomeness! !!! It's so amazing, keep up the awesome work (to both the writer and the editor:twilightsmile: )

We shall try.:twilightsmile:
Thank you for your encouragement.:pinkiehappy:
The next chapter should be out by today. :twilightsmile:

Lol Twilight when she was like maybe a lot boring. Can't wait for some more action! Don't worry about the filler most of the chapter's in my story have just been setting up the scenes and fillers. :raritywink:

Great job! I like it, even though it was short, it added a good touch to the story. I almost fell over in laughter when Twilight was pacing and ranting!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:

Thanks guys! :pinkiehappy:
Appreciate the support! :twilightsmile:
You guys are doing very amazingly good too! :raritystarry:

Wo hoo! :yay:
Finally done with the fifth chapter! :pinkiehappy:
Hope you guys enjoyed! :twilightsmile:

This chapter was short, but it was good 'cause then the readers don't get too many spoilers on your 'mysterious' story. Hmmmph. But I'm your editor, are you sure I can't be an exception?:rainbowlaugh: JK. You like driving me nuts with suspicion.:twilightangry2:

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Of course I do. :pinkiehappy:
And you have to upload one one more chapter before I send you some...:scootangel:

By the way, Solarflare and I are working on a new story, Pranks 101. It will be out soon, so keep your eyes open! :pinkiehappy:

Dun dun dun!Awesome! Can't wait for next chapter and the new story!

Oh, no!!! Gasp!:pinkiegasp: Great chapter. Short but, once again, it doesn't give away too much! :rainbowlaugh:We did get history lessons, as your chapter implies.:twilightsmile:

Also, next chapter will come out today.
Sorry, I promised a longer chapter. :twilightblush:
Hopes the next one makes up for it.
Sorry, but sometimes, I can be a absolute madmare. :facehoof:

Another element! Wow, the Sonic trio can definitely kick some tail... You probably shouldn't mess with them.:rainbowlaugh::raritywink::derpytongue2:

More megawd.....if the elements of harmony are :fluttercry:, :ajbemused:, :rainbowwild:, :raritywink:, :pinkiehappy:, and :twilightsmile:, then what will be about rainstorm and solarflare???????? :rainbowhuh:

Sorry, again, quite lazy. :facehoof:
Still, hope it keeps the suspense up! :pinkiehappy:

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A ridiculously long chapter will come out tomorrow, so hope you can wait that long! :twilightsmile:
Still, glad you enjoy this story! :pinkiehappy:

Don't worry about the short chapter I know how much effort I put into writing just one chapter. :pinkiehappy:

This is quite a short chapter but don't worry you get at least one chapter done everyday, I normally only get one done when I feel like it. Sometimes I will take a break for one day and during the day I will get heaps of new ideas and incorporate them into my story the next day. Looking forwards for your next chapter! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! :twilightsmile:
I will have a really long chapter out today. :pinkiehappy:

Sorry! :twilightblush:
Again, I have a case of writer's block today. It drives me nuts. :twilightangry2:

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It's alright, I've got a pretty bad case of it my self...:twilightsmile:

Whyyyyy?:raritycry::raritydespair:
Anyway, great chapter, got the rest of the Elements, except for Twi. Hope to see more soon!:rainbowwild:

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