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TDR
'It's not about if you win or lose. Sometimes it's about how many pages you add to the rulebook.'
TDR
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I tried reading the story, I really did. But there were so many grammatical errors and the opening was a very stereotypical "insert OC here" moment. Everything was written matter-of-factly and there was very little worldbuilding. Overall, very forgettable
I'm sorry I couldn't make it farther into the story, but I wanted to drop this comment and let you know my opinion of the piece with the most polite of intentions.
Best of luck :)
I for one enjoyed it! And I found comet trails hummer funny XD
Keep up the great work!
Not part of SiS univers??? Hmmm but the noddle insident is mentioned....call me silly but I think you sir put that in there to make your loyal readers more curious about what's going on..... I'm on to you!
4195488 Quite alright. All my world building is in the main story. This was just something stuck in my head i needed to get out.
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I thought it was good. I thought it'd makes sense for Luna to turn him down but i didn't expect the lengths he would go to prove himself to her. I'm hoping for a sequel once SIS is done with him as the Star and his adjustment to his new life.