Queen Chrysalis had only one friend in her entire life, but what happens when an unfortunate accident takes him away?
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Loved this story!
Well written!
A few improvements could be made but it was very good all the way around.
8/10, Would Read Again.
Just a quick formatting reminder: new speaker, new paragraph.
Hmm..definitely a few issues in here that you might catch with a quick proof read, rather not point them out precisely in a comment though.I'm liking the idea of a time-sweetened Chrysalis. Even if it means seeing the dear sad for the time being. I trust there's more coming eventually? I know it's new, not rushing you. Just saying I'mma track this for now. Want to see where you take it.
A very good story and ending, if I have one complaint its that I feel there could have been much more.
Still 9/10 worth rereading
It was a wee bit too fast. But I liked it.