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One grounding law of the universe is that light can not exist without darkness to be cast aside. Chaos can not exist without order to be revoked. Evil can not take root without purity to be corrupted. The world is constantly in a state of balance, but what happens when the scales are tipped too far in one direction? In a universe where order and chaos; light and dark; good and evil are beings incarnate, this is not a question which is easily answered.

For 1,000 years there has been complete order, but that is all about to change. The years of utopian harmony and order have weakened the spirit of pony-kind. Without true evil to be revoked and dispelled, innocence and purity have given way to naivety where corruption long since forgotten has taken root like never before; invisible and cancerous. Beneath the present facade, political groups are vying for control, villains plot schemes of anarchy, a group of power-hungry scientists commit moral atrocities in preparation for the coming horrors, and somewhere in Ponyiville a deranged sadist has finally pulled the last straw. In an instant everything shatters, leaving behind only the fragments of a once beautiful world.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 41 )

So, this is my first story ever. Sorry if it's not perfect, (Which I realise it isn't) but if you do dislike it, please leave some constructive critcism in the comments. I'm going to need it if I'm ever going to get better.

Oh, and one final thing. Try not to completely judge the story from the Introduction. Many a great chapter are on the way.
:pinkiehappy:

I liked it. I needed something dark to keep me a little bit insane. I think some insanity is good for me as long as I don't go too insane.:pinkiecrazy:

Oh one more thing, have a hug.:ajsmug:

Good potential, keep it up.:yay:

Why in the name of the good lord Celestia did I read this. Time to go and bleach my eyeballs.

Sorry in advance for the delayed update, but I'm taking a short camping trip. The next update is scheduled for saturday currently.

Sorry this took so long to update, but I had to go on a camping trip this week, and not only did that eat up time, but during it, I somehow misplaced ALL of my work, so I have to type it from scratch. :fluttercry: Well, I worked my butt off, and FINALLY got this up for you guys, so :pinkiehappy:

Hm, I don't know, the name tells me it's based off Rainbow Factory but I'll give it a shot.

So Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory took place in the same universe? Clever idea. I will continue reading! :pinkiecrazy:

This is a great story I have never even heard of this site wow (please continue it)

Can you hurry up on the updates the supspences is killing

2954824 I'm really sorry about the update speed. I have a rather busy life. Tell you what, I'll go take a shower, eat some breakfast, and then I'll finish up the chapter I'm working on. :scootangel:

That a good idea, i will be proud of this

3022697 All right. This computer is going offline for a day or two, but I got the chapter up just in time. There might be a few typos since I didn't have time to reread it, but it's up. Thanks for the support. :twilightsheepish:

Thank you this is the best story can't wait till you make more socool


If you didn't get my other one here this the story is cool can't wait till you make another ,awsome

1380763 I've read Rainbow Factory and I cried :fluttercry: but, I haven't read cupcakes. dude, this is should be AWESOME!!!!!

Hey guys! :pinkiehappy: I was just writing a new chapter and I realized something. I don't have any pre-readers to help me out. If you want to give me some advice or take a look at what I have written so far then just send me a private message saying so and I'll give you the password as soon as possible. Thanks for helping me out guys, you're the best. :raritywink:

I want to help but I have know how by the way keep up the good awsone stories. I want to help

I could not get in but the past stories I advice to stop using stories with other characters while the others are not finished also like twilight stop in a gunfight. But other than that keep up the good work

3293207 I don't know. I kind of like to jump around. The reason for this is that a lot of these events are happening simultaneously, so if I were to tell the entire story from one pony's point of view than I would have to jump back to the beginning to tell it from another pony's perspective and most of the plot-twists would be ruined since you would already know where the plot was headed and what would happen to the focus character once the first one is complete. Sorry if that bugs you, but I can't really change the miscellaneous order of characters. :applejackunsure:

K but that is just way to many right now

3294938 WELL TOO BAD *Adds yet another character to the ever-thickening plot
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(Seriously, I love you dude.)

Ooohh shit girl, you crasie eśe...

Okedokes, I'm never using google chrome again...

Flutetrshy's getting high on these trees.

ALL THE FEELS MAN
Do you see the feels?
Do you want the feels?
I DON'T CARE, BE THE FEELS
SHARE THE FEELS
SNIFF THE FEELS
FART THE FEELS
FEEL THE FEELS
BE THE FEELS
FEELS

Oh my gosh now your going back to alsome that was the best part I ever read keep it up and the title maybe

Yes another good wait another best I'm praise you awsome

Omg I just read your story over and over again you were always awsome I love it

Hey just to inform you someone trying to copy you and it made take me some time to go to you book because his are all over the place so remember I like yours but it may take me some time to find it

I decided to uncheck the "sad" category simply for the reason that the focus is not on being sad. There are a lot of sad moments and chapters that are sad in general, but the overall tone is not one simply of sadness. Rather I try to focus on telling a good story with a grimdark atmosphere which naturally leads to some very sad and dramatic moments. :trixieshiftright: Overall I just don't think giving it the tag gives readers the right impression of what the fanfic is going to be about.

ok I really didn't understand the fluttering part but it was good. Like what you did to image title

I decided to change the name of the fanfiction to better reflect what it's about. The original vision has changed a lot. Hope I didn't confuse anybody. :twilightblush:

Out of curiosity, what realities were the second and third bodies she inhabited from? The first one sounded like the a cupcakes styled story were rsrity makes dresses out of ponies fur, manes and skin and poniquins out of the rest, and the last vaguely like the rule 63 verse, or I think so anyways, correct me if I'm wrong.

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