When the New Kid and the Boys end up in Equestria, little do they know that their game will have more consequences than they could ever imagined. However, they are too engaged into their game to notice.
4549115 Then I want the Jew, Butters, and our King Douchebag to be part of this. That would be totally freaking sweet! And what happened to the Stick of Truth? Discord took it, so...?
I was almost disappointed that Queen Chrysalis either didn't get deposed or otherwise legitimately allied with Cartman, but at least he put on a helluva show. He didn't just swear up a storm, he swore up a whole supercell!
Also, I laughed the hardest at the ending. I can now only imagine an army of Billy Mayses rampaging through Canterlot selling Oxi-cleaning everypony to death. Assuming, of course, the ponies aren't immediately enamored with their hammy sales pitch. I wonder if they'll try to outsell Flim and Flam?
Also, interesting facts on scorpionflies. [The More You Know]
Can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully we'll find out what became of Kyle and Stan, or see more progress with King Douchebag.
“Yes,” said the queen nonchalantly, “How can I forget such an important thing? You are Putakate one of my...uh… what is it that you do again?” “I’m one of captains of your army, my Queen,” responded Putukate, not bothering to hide the remorse this time. “Yes,” said the queen nonchalantly, “How can I forget such an important thing? You are Putakate one of my...uh… what is it that you do again
Second one probably shouldn't be there.
Instead of giving this Grand Wizard his army, she’ll make him part of her
I assume there's an "army" after that, unless Chrysalis is into that sort of thing. Those were the major ones I saw.
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Ha the South Park disclaimer! I'm adding this to read later.
“Hi, I’m Billy Mays!” proclaimed the changeling now turned into sales legend. The Grand Wizard’s mood immediately cheered up. The changeling Billy Mays felt some positive emotion emitting from him. It wasn't love but rather admiration. Whatever it was, she started to feed of the Grand Wizard’s admiration for Billy Mays.
You evil genius. I'm so glad I proofread this.
Also, for telling about Scorpionflies.
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You better god damn respect his authoritah if you don't your flank dealt with from our Righteously Awesome Great Wizard King.
By the way, where the heck is King Douchebag? That fatty better find our King, or all Equestria will break loose.
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What if I were to tell you that I want all Equestria to break loose?
4549115 Then I want the Jew, Butters, and our King Douchebag to be part of this. That would be totally freaking sweet! And what happened to the Stick of Truth? Discord took it, so...?
Cant wait for the next Chapter. Wait where's Kyle?
I was almost disappointed that Queen Chrysalis either didn't get deposed or otherwise legitimately allied with Cartman, but at least he put on a helluva show. He didn't just swear up a storm, he swore up a whole supercell!
Also, I laughed the hardest at the ending. I can now only imagine an army of Billy Mayses rampaging through Canterlot selling Oxi-cleaning everypony to death. Assuming, of course, the ponies aren't immediately enamored with their hammy sales pitch. I wonder if they'll try to outsell Flim and Flam?
Also, interesting facts on scorpionflies. [The More You Know]
Can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully we'll find out what became of Kyle and Stan, or see more progress with King Douchebag.
LOL! I laughed at the Billy Mays part!
With the things Cartman has seen, we need to be afraid of what he turns the army into. Very afraid.
Yeah! Billy Mays!
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Locked up, see chapter three.
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And knowing is half the battle. Don't worry there will be deaths a la South Park style.
Overpowered cartman is overpowered!
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He's also overpowered in the game.
4552497 True, but he did have the lowest health of any partner.
Got a few mix-ups.
Second one probably shouldn't be there.
I assume there's an "army" after that, unless Chrysalis is into that sort of thing.
Those were the major ones I saw.
Great chapter.
Chrysalis got a look at the mind of true evil. Will there be any consequeces from that.
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Thanks, I'll fix them as soon as i can
Fatso has an army of Billy Mays. I'm not sure if I should be afraid or not.
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Okay I checked and the mixups were errors from transitioning the chapter from Gdocs. They have been fixed.
4553430 You should be afraid. VERY afraid.
Ah yes, Billy Mays. He could sell an electric vibrator to an Amish housewife.
You can only wonder if she saw the Christmas Critters.
4551152 I assume every here and there a corpse will crap itself.
4549115 *chuckling heartily* Now THAT I'm looking forward to.
Throwing Cartman into a pit with the most depraved and rebellious changeling that have opposed Chrysalis. Hindsight truly is 20/20.
Hi Billy mays here. And Im here to tell you Chrysalis that you fucked up.
..................Words cannot describe how funny that was.......and how much Cartman owned their chitin asses.......
Ha the South Park disclaimer! I'm adding this to read later.
But wait, there's more...Billy Mays army will send more of him in battle FREE!
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