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Clonehunter


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Three years after the death of his family, three years after his life went spiraling into depression and self-pity, Carrot Cake has found himself working as a volunteer officer of the law in Ponyville. But when he receives a letter from an old friend and is assigned to work on a dangerous operation, he finds himself targeted by many and on the run. But this sudden series of deadly events have also opened new head-ways into the truth about his family's murder.

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Comments ( 10 )

Now this is an interesting crossover I must say. Tracked and thumbed up for the it being something new and highly intriguing! :pinkiesmile:

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Thank you for taking an interest in it! I'm glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

Wow, man, this was way better than expected! It's still early to judge, though, so I'll track this, watch you, and see what comes out of it.
Cheers! :raritywink:

Another excellently written chapter. :pinkiesmile:

Whatever you do, just please don't stop writing this.

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Thank you again for the support, it's really appreciative! :raritystarry:

And I'll do my best to not stop writing it until the story is done. :raritywink:

A tree that big has to have deep roots, Carrot. You're on the right track.

Have I told you I love this, Clonehunter? It feels like Max Payne, but even though it's an adaptation, the worldbuilding is fitting for both and you made one important thing clear: Carrot isn't Max. He's on about the same track, but it shows that he's not simply a pony possessed by Max's personality.

this is the end.............DAMN IT! MOAR!

This story needs one hell of a lot more attention. It's short and a bit rushed, and Rainbow Dash was a bit of a forced insertion, but that's all regarding my complaints. The way you wrote is beautiful, man, it's like you were part of the development team for the first 2 games.

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Heh, sorry. Who knows, when a few months pass by, maybe I'll write something up. :raritywink:


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Yah, I know it's short, waaay shorter than the games lol, but I didn't want to drag it either. And Dash may of been slightly shoe horned in, but I wanted a Mona Sax. :rainbowkiss:

Again, thanks for all the comments!

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