Three years after the death of his family, three years after his life went spiraling into depression and self-pity, Carrot Cake has found himself working as a volunteer officer of the law in Ponyville. But when he receives a letter from an old friend and is assigned to work on a dangerous operation, he finds himself targeted by many and on the run. But this sudden series of deadly events have also opened new head-ways into the truth about his family's murder.
Now this is an interesting crossover I must say. Tracked and thumbed up for the it being something new and highly intriguing!
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Thank you for taking an interest in it! I'm glad you liked it!
Wow, man, this was way better than expected! It's still early to judge, though, so I'll track this, watch you, and see what comes out of it.
Cheers!
Another excellently written chapter.
Whatever you do, just please don't stop writing this.
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Thank you again for the support, it's really appreciative!
And I'll do my best to not stop writing it until the story is done.
A tree that big has to have deep roots, Carrot. You're on the right track.
Have I told you I love this, Clonehunter? It feels like Max Payne, but even though it's an adaptation, the worldbuilding is fitting for both and you made one important thing clear: Carrot isn't Max. He's on about the same track, but it shows that he's not simply a pony possessed by Max's personality.
this is the end.............DAMN IT! MOAR!
This story needs one hell of a lot more attention. It's short and a bit rushed, and Rainbow Dash was a bit of a forced insertion, but that's all regarding my complaints. The way you wrote is beautiful, man, it's like you were part of the development team for the first 2 games.
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Heh, sorry. Who knows, when a few months pass by, maybe I'll write something up.
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Yah, I know it's short, waaay shorter than the games lol, but I didn't want to drag it either. And Dash may of been slightly shoe horned in, but I wanted a Mona Sax.
Again, thanks for all the comments!
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