• Member Since 29th Mar, 2014
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SkyDreams


Voice actor, artist, author. I can do it.

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Not every creature is destined to make friends, Some a meant to remain social Pariahs

This is the story of one such creature. He is hated, tolerated, even respected by some but not loved.

Can a hero from the past save the worst that ever was?

(Yes this story has some amnesia. I promise it's not corny)

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 6 )

Interesting premiss, although I think there are quite some people out there who won't like the amnesia-thing.

The only real issue I have with this story is the lack of consistency when it comes to how the townsfolks react to the character. It's mixed hatred and acceptance, but not at the same time. At first, everypony hates and agrees to shoot him and without anything segnificant happening, they let them guard their children. That seems a little bit off.

But apart from that I like this story so far and will read it as it progresses.

Thank you! And don't worry. As you might have suspected there is already quite a bit of history in the town and those issues are already addressed. I hope you'll enjoy the coming chapters, The wasteland is a strange place filled with strange ponies.:rainbowkiss:

Oof it's been 4 years. Well look at that. I'm updating the story. made a light overhaul, and I put out 3 chapters in two months. Not bad If I do say so myself. Chapter 5 is almost done also!

The image is a place holder I'll be updating that soon also.

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A hub page is a full collection of a particular story. This particular one links to the google doc version of my story which is updated in real time if I ever make changes or corrections.

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