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Nice touching moment between Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy... I love the small touch of the wonderbolts near the end too.
I wish for more one-shots like these.
Wow, that was REALLY good.
I did find one error that you might want to fix:
"Why didn’t Spitfire just join in and help? He would have made the difference!"
It should be "She would have made the difference!"
That was great, I'm faving this. Hope it gets featured!
This is pretty good, exept for one thing.
Why didn’t Spitfire just join in and help? He would have made the difference!
Spitfire is a mare, not a stallion.
great work!
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Thanks for noticing that. I often forget that basically everyone's a mare...
Glad you all liked it
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Well than I guess I should start writing more one-shots like this one
All your stories are so nice.