Crow Maud

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For Maud Pie, family is the most important. She'll do anything to protect her sisters... Like she couldn't protect herself.

Inspired by a song "Crow Jane" by Nick Cave and The Bad Seeds.

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TheCloudtop

TheCloudtop #1 · Mar 25th, 2014 · · ·

Damn, that was a great read. Good job!

Et-Luna-Et-Stellis

Et-Luna-Et-Stellis #2 · Mar 25th, 2014 · · 1 ·

I love how you suggested with hints at what happened. And by Celestia's beard you do a great Maud impression. This piece is awesome.

Samey90

Samey90 #3 · Mar 25th, 2014 · 2 · ·

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Thanks

TheCloudtop

TheCloudtop #4 · Mar 25th, 2014 · 1 · ·

4134307 No problem.

MarkTheWolfpony

MarkTheWolfpony #5 · Apr 11th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Now that was interesting.

Silver Nightshade

Silver Nightshade #6 · Jun 17th, 2014 · 1 · 2 ·

This was amazing I actually really liked Maud when they introduced her in Season 4 so figuring out what those Stallions did to her make me proud of the fact she killed effectively half of the mine's population. If it weren't for the foals though I probably would've killed the mares as well just so that there were no witnesses. the bit where Maud thinks to herself after the seller asks where she's off to really didn't make much sense to me though.....

Bootsy Slickmane

Bootsy Slickmane #7 · Aug 20th, 2014 · 1 · 1 ·

Damn, that was nice. Simple, short, well-written. I can easily hear Maud's voice in my head doing the narration. You really nailed her style here. This certainly explains Maud's explosion of protectiveness for Pinkie during that episode; she wasn't ever going to let anything happen to one of her own, not after what she went through herself. A good little revenge story.

Samey90

Samey90 #8 · Aug 20th, 2014 · · ·

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Well, Maud is perfect for 1st person narration... (though one has to watch out to not be overly enthusiastic. But reading the story aloud in Maud's voice helps a lot).

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