So this isn't really a story, more an effort on my part to deal with some thoughts that have been really bugging me lately in a way that isn't as close to home, but I do think it turned out pretty well for what it is, so I figured I would share it.
It's pretty much my idea of the worst case scenario for an immortal Twilight- left behind by time but unable or unwilling to be released by death.
Sort of inspired by the song "Eternity" by Jeff Burgess.
Now with a dramatic reading: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VKOWRYVTONs
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Very good story, I'd love to see more from ya.
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I'm working on a non-pony project right now, but I like to take breaks by writing weird fanfiction like this, so I'll probably post some more stories, possibly in the same universe as this
Thanks, that's really great to hear
Nice work! There were some really cool concepts at work here,and I love a story that teaches me some new vocabulary. If I had to give one critique, I'd say that there were a few sentences that either ran on or could have used some shortening, but the voice was really nice and consistent and the story itself was a very interesting read. Thumbs up!
????...I got confused
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What confused you?