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Maud Pie211 stories ·453 members

Maud's Side Job

While it was nice to meet up with pinkie and her friends, Maud Pie must now return to her regular life. She never did let pinkie know about her other side job… And what a job it is.

Woo first time ever writing something, I know it's horrible but hey at least it's something right? We all start somewhere. This is for the Equestria dailys Writing trainings ground.

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forrest yuchnitz

forrest yuchnitz #1 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

i dont get it why do new stories that have no likes or dislikes and no comments always have a red bar indicating dislikes?

MyFaceYourFace

MyFaceYourFace #2 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

4111750 I don't know.... Maybe they considered a fic is bad until proven otherwise rather then the opposite.

The Dauntless Entrinity

The Dauntless Entrinity #3 · May 6th, 2014 · · ·

I absolutely love this story. It starts now short and sweet and fills in the reader nicely, I can't think of any questions I have about the lore other than nit-picking things like "who paid for their ship?" Or "why do rock monsters exist?" Or "what's the mass of the sun?". The lore opens a path for a very fun to read story with adventure and danger. I truly felt along for the ride in this. Maud's character didn't act out of personality and captures the charm of a "silent master". Though Maud doesn't talk or express much, she seems like a master of her craft and yet, somehow, it doesn't seem over powered. Keep up with it. No spelling mistakes, no grammar, tons of potential!
9.1/10

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