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Cycnus


Wake up Sonnie Cracker and quit straining yourself from singing with the fat lady.

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Tragedy strikes the Pie Family, scarring Pinkie through her childhood and for life. As Pinkie comes to terms with her apparent former Gypsy roots, her out witting mind gets the best of her and she is convinced that something can be done. Even if it means using those around her. Especially her innocent little helper, Apple Bloom.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 9 )

AH I WAS GOING TO WRITE A STORY ABOUT THIS

Comment posted by Cycnus deleted Mar 22nd, 2014

Hey Fire, it's me Lightning... I am getting to be done real soon, if that made any real sense:derpytongue 2:

I would like to enjoy this story, but it has one big problem that makes it very difficult to get through the first chapter - a new speaker should always get a new paragraph, regardless of where the speech starts in that paragraph.

Wait, if Pinkie needed the flesh of an earth pony. When she jumped it, shouldn't it have worked? :unsuresweetie:

some care less pony

Careless is one word. Also, where's Maud? Didn't Pinkie have three sisters? And if I were to write this, the Galloping Blaze would be Aria Blaze.

Omg, what a great story, i live in hoofston. Bad grammar , but who cares, loved it, great job, Grant! ;P even if its a little dark
PS nice use of both of the song lyrics

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