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When Rainbow Dash tells her friends Soarin' asked her out, the other five mares decide to take matters into their own hooves; however, their seemingly amazing and helpful ideas not only guarantee a night she remembers, but one she would rather forget.
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I can foresee big trouble ahead.
Great story :) , can't wait to read more
Your summary is a grammatical nightmare. Why would I possibly invest any time into reading this? The summary is the 'face' of your story. And right now, your 'face' has a black eye and a swollen jaw.
Take some pride in your work;
-Lumino
I'm not the one to judge work by a first impression, but when a writer spells out the word "preparations" incorrectly for a chapter title, it will doubt a reader that there was any real effort put in the story.
Consider hiring a proofreader to fix both the grammatical and punctuational errors in your story.
Good luck
~majema007
I enjoy how you've portrayed this story from both angles of RD and Soarin'. It helps us understand more about the plot and where it'll lead. Plus this really seems like a plot element that the actual writers of the show could use. Oh, and anyone that down votes you just because of spelling error obviously isn't patient or open minded; although, fixing that could help.
And just to mess with those grammar Nazis - fuq ottokorekt
4107949 Hey thanks! I try making this story a little more three-dimensional by offering sides from both parties.
4107816 "Preparations" are one of those words I always seem to misspell - I'm currently working on having someone proofread this story before I post any more chapters. I'll probably re-post this one once I have the corrections.
4107587 The summary can definitely use some work. My hope is to have that fixed over the weekend before posting any additional chapters.
4108816 I forgot to add this but your story is not half-bad at all. Its just that with some of the members of FIMFiction, they really take first impressions seriously.
Also consider in not spoiling a little too much in your story's summary.
Cheers
~majema007
Lol i was laughing so hard when i read that dashie tripped
I don't think you would even have to READ the story summary to know that things are going to go down hill for Dashie. Can't wait to see how they mess this up. Keep it up, it's a great fic so far.
Also good job Cynical gamer. You deserve a cookie for your 1st comment. It twas perfect. XD
Don't blame her for that reaction. I'd be pretty pissed at my friends to if they messed up my date.
I hope soarin finds a way to make it up to her
Well, each friends I guess needs too learn something:
A date is only a party for the two ponies.
There's such a thing as too much or such.
Not every book has good advice. And when it does only use some of them at the right place and time.
Only time for bird song is maybe outside.
And I guess there's a thing known as too much makeup.
http://www.quickmeme.com/img/a4/a41445b77e3ea8a31e5bc8e84f30aab1e5bd0fd646224d372359d5f8059aa533.jpg
4499176 I'll hopefully get an update soon; my life's been kind of hectic, but I do plan on getting that last chapter up ASAP
Great story bro. This last chapter was a good one. I wish you luck in future stories.
Nice story!
I like this chapter a lot, hard to find one like this... Keep bring awesome :)
I love this ending, keep up the good work.. :)
oh so good
Awesome! I was really excited to see that the next part had come out! Keep up the good work!
#Murphy'd
They done did it.
100% Tortoise approved!
Rarity is gonna eff it up.
y'all know Rares is gonna eff it up
If I were in Rainbow's position I would have ripped off the dress by now, and I would have given Rares a serious talk.
and not a nice one.
Rainbow's friends acted like meddling jack*****, but I still say that this should really be an episode!
Also, have a follow! And a fav!
One of my favorite SoarinDash fic ♥ I really enjoyed it
I would be scared to shit if her friends DID ruin it
Ooooh shit. If I were Rainbow Dash I would've escaped during the song.
They... didn't... kiss...? WHAEKKSJSJEKEKSW IM TRIGGERED
GODNESS THIS WAS AMAZING!!!
I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!
Well that sure was something unexpected. Though the title says it all. Still awesome.
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Even if I were me or Dash, I would’ve escaped.