Dogma of a Dragon
written by DarkParable
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Don't get me wrong, the story is really nice so far...
But I'm rather disappointed in a certain group of six overgrown fillies. Seriously, why would you risk provoking what you think is a guardian by jumping it like that? Wouldn't trying to dismantle or disable it before hand make much more sense?
Granted,
in all her hot-headed glory did it, but still.
Oh good, it survived moderation this time!
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Hopefully decently considering this is the first time I've sat down and wrote anything in a long while.
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Arigato
Ok wow. I gotta thank everyone who's fav'd and liked this today. Seriously, pushing 30 favs in about nine-ten hours or so. So, thank you one and all. Everyone who favorited this, up voted it, or just gave it a look. You've made my day.
please please please tell me he breaks her wings please!!!!!!!
or at least they try to attack him and Fluttershy gives them the stare at the ponies not the dragon.
Good story, please continue!
this story is good
please continue 
I approve
damn it rainbow always fucking things up and twi really? just insult it right to its face why don't cha? he was being nice and now I think it's time to cut a bitch. data2.whicdn.com/images/30105576/thumb.jpg
Że co, kurwa?
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I'm sorry, but I don't know what that means.
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Thank you kindly
4208163 It's in Polish.
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Lol, Alrighty.
Nice chapter!
Im up to him breaking rainbow wings, maybe that way she will learn something.
Rainbow being made to look like a gigantic retard, the norm for every HiE.
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I wouldn't say retard... More just brash and impatient as usual.
Nice
more
This is awesome. More please
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More WILL be coming. Sorry if this disappoints, but I will be taking my time about it. Rushing usually results in a load of crap that's not worth reading and I flat out refuse to give everyone something like that.
On a lighter note... Thank you for reading
4209099 Well quality over quantity is always preferred. Take your time, I apologize if I seemed demanding.
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Oh not at all. Just wanted to be clear that updates will come slowly. Didn't mean to sound as if I was griping at you two.
4209209 Alright cool.
4209209 I wouldn't mind if you do the update once a week type thing. but if you need more time then I suppose I can wait longer. *whimpers*
Dude, tone down on the country stereotypes for AJ. That's NOT really what she sounds like.
Not really sure why you made her like that in the first place, but alright then.
Ok, this one part messed up my attempted at trying to get through this without editing. It really should be "orange".
You have my attention though.
4209551 I have to agree, her accent isn't that strong.
4209673 whoops. I do on occasion miss a character on a word or two. Old keyboard.
Don't you dare try abandoning this. I've seen your story list
. Don't you dare 
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There was some punctuation errors as well, but that took the cake. Usually spell checkers get that stuff.
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Wasn't planning on it o_o
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They never do
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Y'know, that gives me a good idea for a story. INTO THE VAULT IT GOES!
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more morere more more more more...
Oh wait... this counts as spam. Shit.
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Uhh... No worries?
I like the story idea but the writing it's self could use some work.
Wow, very good! I can't wait for the next update!
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Working on that.
Um, AJ's approach to the unknown is to buck it in the face?
Reminds me of Frost Wyrms from the Warcraft universe; especially the cover.
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of course!! its all species first instinct to reject the unknown with force, brutality, religious sect, war, and hooves. what else did you expect?
Good work mate, as I've told you (or should have told you), here's another comment to hopefully make your day/evening/afternon/noon/morning/after-morning/fore-morning/another-time-of-day.
4210684 That's because the cover image IS a frostwyrm. Sindragosa, in fact, from the Wrath of the Lich King cinematic.I could assault you with more information than you want on the character just for shits and giggles, but I won't.
Plz updated soon I really like this!
Would have prefered for a dragon lich to be stronger than just to have RD knock his head off in the first 30 seconds of meeting him. But meh. Still a good story.
Duuude.
FUCK YES !
MORE DAMMIT. MOOOOAAAAARRRRR