The television has just been invented. Discord found out. Now what will happen as he teaches ponies how to... Kill! Nothing could go wrong. Could it?
The television has just been invented. Discord found out. Now what will happen as he teaches ponies how to... Kill! Nothing could go wrong. Could it?
The skip this chapter note should probably be at the top, because as it is people are only finding out they should skip the chapter after they've read it.
Hmmm, I believe I have just discovered something that moves faster than the speed of light. The pacing of this story. Also, you should work on capitalizing what needs to be capitalized.
4096862 Two very good points, as this is my first fanfic you can't really expect too much. In my next fanfic I will fix all grammar problems. I do kow how to capitalize, im just so used to facebook and capitalizing everything, it's just OCD ya know