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Should be very.
You should also use 'light' instead of 'lite.' Lite is marketing-speak and shouldn't be used anywhere other than ads or packaging. There's a couple of lites in the previous chapter as well.
You missed quotation marks for Zecora's 'a few more pieces' line.
'Defrib' doesn't have an R, and if you want to be technical, should be 'CPR.' A defibrillator corrects an arrhythmic heartbeat, it doesn't restart a stopped one.
Apart from all that, I didn't notice anything else. Good work so far, and it's interesting to finally see a woman in the Xenoverse.
Also fortunate that around 75% of the liver can be removed if all else fails, as it will grow back