Shining Armor teases Cadence at a formal dinner party. She is not one to let it go so easily.
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*slow clap*
Well done, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. (3
wait......this all happened in three minutes?
4074121 i think her spell slowed down time but im not sure
Now I have a mental image of a horse clenching it's toes
4075237
Good catch. I originally wrote this as humanized, but changed it after the fact. Apparently I didn't catch everything.
4075357
I'm very glad you decided to change it. I have an aversion to Humanized fics unless it adds to the story in some large way. I feel as though Humanizing the ponies is a cop out as an author.
4074470
Yes, the idea was that the spell slowed down time. I didn't want to beat readers over the head with it, though. Rather, I wanted to kind of lampshade the first chapter's notion of "time passing too slowly" with an unexpected inversion at the end.
Really well done here. So much teasing heightened the anticipation for the final scene quite well.
I'm glad you decided to switch away from humanized. I agree with 4075518 that unless it adds to the story in some large way, it tends to tarnish the story rather than helping it.
Awwwww yeah!
Just what is Cadance? She has hooves and toes?
I am confused once more.
Pretty sure horse "breasts" are called teats and are not high enough to be on the chest. It seems like they kept flicking between ponies and anthro ponies. At some point using magic to eat and drink and at others clenching newly formed toes during an orgasm.
4081669
See previous comment about how I originally wrote it as humanized characters, then I went back the following day and rewrote it to be normal pony versions of the characters (and missed one or two details in the overhaul).
4142762
I generally like to go by this rule. Despite the ambiguity that can be introduced, I feel the serial comma removes more than it adds.
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what was the Papa Roach reference I have read through it four times now
(admittedly I'm not as bigger fan as I once was)
The end was so sweet All that happen in 2 minutes? That a bit short lived