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Love Will Find A Way

Long before Celestia and Luna were around, there were three kingdoms of ponies all ruled by their Kings and Queens. Everything seemed peaceful to every pony. But one faithful day when a Pegasus falls out of the sky is when everything changes.

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Prolouge · 10th Mar 2014 · 1,010 words
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Chapter 1: The Meeting · 27th Mar 2014 · 2,044 words
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NurseryRhyme

NurseryRhyme #1 · Mar 10th, 2014 · · · Prolouge ·

Criticism is welcome btw just please dont be too harsh lol. Anything i need to improve on before i start writing more or what? Please let me know

TheBig3

TheBig3 #2 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · · Prolouge ·

Seems like you're off to a good start. Some capitalization errors, i instead of I, but otherwise didn't notice any problems. Hoping to see more from you soon.