A snip I made for a contest a few years ago.
Lyra wants hands, but she will find something else along the way... More exactly, that magic is unpredictable.
an amateur writter and brony(with a hint of otaku here and there.)
A snip I made for a contest a few years ago.
Lyra wants hands, but she will find something else along the way... More exactly, that magic is unpredictable.
Yeah, you had a few grammar errors in it that are easily fixable. But it was a good story, and I guess it was a little fast paced. But the read was good.