Rainbow Dash, Elemental Bearer of Loyalty, is being transported somewhere after being misfired by her friend's teleportation spell. Now, five years later, she has returned, but being different than she was now.
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cellum95
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kinda hard to read BUT, i will fav this just to see it improve and see where this goes
4051794 Uhm okay.
Cant wait for more!
4052001 Oh don't worry about it anyway. Still, if your interested in the Pony Adventure Stories project, then notify me if you will, and I will deal anybody who wanted to the start the project.
*Project still in it's infancy. Expect shit*
instant like for a matrix crossover but why didnt they let them see them
4077106 Plot development.
way too short but im still liking this matrix cross over
4100797 yeah. I'm sorry because I'm playing World of Tanks.
Name in WoT: cellum95
This reminds me of a YouTube video[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=CtXZzncSA30]
amazing work!
Hmm…
An interesting concept, but you kinda need an editor. You already shifted tense during the first few sentences.
And again…
Sorry if I sound condescending, but switching tenses tends to annoy your readers.
Would have been cooler if the Equestria was a simulation in the Matrix instead of hundredth story about the pony disappearing into the human world and then abandoned. But I guess we will never know.