4045722 Your writing skill is well above mine when it comes to emotional shit, but at the price of occasional misspellings and grammar mistakes. Seems like a decent trade off.
Um, what makes them anthro again? While skimming the first chapter and a bit of the beginning of the second one, I don't seem to notice anyone resembling an anthro pony keeping most of their pony traits as in their heads, fur, tail, wings, or hooves for feet. I may be looking at it too fast but this seems more like a humanized fanfic then anthro, unless that's what happens in the third chapter.
Wings mostly. Color can be retained whether the reader wants it or not, I suggested that color was retained with Pinkie Pie's encounter. I also haven't described the faces much either. They could go either way as well.
But I did explicitly include wings
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I don't plan on any hooves though, and tails seem like they're out of the picture or they would've made an appearance already.
4045866 So in other words the "ponies" in this fic don't exactly resemble the original definition. From the way you just described them, sounds more like winged and tailed humanizations, with Equestria Girls skin coloring on the side. That's not enough of a description of them to be considered half-human half-pony, at least... in the usual sense. If that's how you see anthro characters I suppose I can't stop you, but I might have to warn you that others from the other anthropomorphic group might not be happy about it. Hopefully the ones that won't be happy about it are most likely just lurkers and you'll most likely never hear from them at all, so it's not all that bad.
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Chapter update. Enjoy
Dash tore *off* the rest of her few remaining clothes
You put of instead of off.
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Ya nearly did that last night but caught myself then. That's literally my biggest pet peeve when it comes to mistakes I make
Fixed.
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Your writing skill is well above mine when it comes to emotional shit, but at the price of occasional misspellings and grammar mistakes. Seems like a decent trade off.
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Lol. I'm a poet at heart, and my poetry tends to ignore grammatical bounds.
I am working on getting grammar locked down though. Grammatical errors make it a bit less professional.
Um, what makes them anthro again? While skimming the first chapter and a bit of the beginning of the second one, I don't seem to notice anyone resembling an anthro pony keeping most of their pony traits as in their heads, fur, tail, wings, or hooves for feet. I may be looking at it too fast but this seems more like a humanized fanfic then anthro, unless that's what happens in the third chapter.
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Wings mostly. Color can be retained whether the reader wants it or not, I suggested that color was retained with Pinkie Pie's encounter. I also haven't described the faces much either. They could go either way as well.
But I did explicitly include wings
EDIT:
I don't plan on any hooves though, and tails seem like they're out of the picture or they would've made an appearance already.
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So in other words the "ponies" in this fic don't exactly resemble the original definition. From the way you just described them, sounds more like winged and tailed humanizations, with Equestria Girls skin coloring on the side. That's not enough of a description of them to be considered half-human half-pony, at least... in the usual sense. If that's how you see anthro characters I suppose I can't stop you, but I might have to warn you that others from the other anthropomorphic group might not be happy about it. Hopefully the ones that won't be happy about it are most likely just lurkers and you'll most likely never hear from them at all, so it's not all that bad.
SRSLY U ARE KILLING ME WITH THESE POEMS TELL ME WHAT IS UR GRADE IN ENGLISH!!!!!!! i envy u i can never make that beautiful poetry What is ur secrete?