Damn, this is good.

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Thanks, I'm glad to hear that people like my story.

TBH I was a little hesitant about submitting it because I wasn't certain how good it was.

Plus it was the spawn of a 2am spree....nothing good ever happens at 2 am

4042939 well i actually write at my best at 2 am any other time i get distracted.

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I'm like that with programming. I find that sometimes when I write tired I end up drooling all over the page as my brain explodes in fatigue.

Other than that ya, no distractions is awesome.

I really just need to get an I.V. full of caffeine for nights like that

4043013 I always have a cup of coffee nearby, in the event of a full brain shut down.

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Haha I used to have a stockpile of monsters. I won a 3 month supply in a raffle at a party.

They lasted about 3 weeks

4043040 I'm pretty much the same when it comes to stuff like that, Some thing that should last me at least a couple weeks I blow through it within a couple days.

4043040 also btw i really love the coverart!

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It's not mine but I spent a lot of time choosing it. I had to have something anthro that expressed how Dash really felt about her situation. Her complete and total emotional instability had to be realized through the art.

The guy who drew that is an absolute god.

4043073 Definitely! Dash looks amazing, whilst also looking as if she has some sad, inner turmoil. The artist needs some kind of medal!

Update tonight. It should be posted before 11 pm EST.

I'm liking this. But who will she make out with next to be happy???

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Update very soon be patient, and I suggest you reread how Soarin reacted.

Last paragraph. Should be

sped back towards her mansion

not

Speed back towards her mansion.

Other than that, there were no noticeable errors and it was an amazing story. Please continue.

4045502

working on it right now actually doing a runthrough to make sure I catch errors like that this time. reread my authors note today and realized just how sleepdrunk I was last night.

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Nice. I do most of my best writing when I'm sleep deprived. For some reason, my inner grammar Nazi comes out when I'm tired.

4045601

I wish it was like that with me. My best ideas come when I'm sleep deprived but my logic goes to java, not english. My grammar skills take an exponential course downwards after around 12 am.