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Release

Dash had her shot. Yeah, that one. The one she's always talking about. And she blew it.

What else can you do but your best?

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Magello

Magello #1 · Mar 3rd, 2014 · · ·

It's not bad, story wise. Give it to an editor though. You need some grammar checking. End of this chapter feels pretty rushed. Check into extending it a bit.