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Cheerilee gets tired of her sister Berry Punch's drinking problem. She forces her to go to the new therapist Sweet Ears to get rid of them. Berry Punch isn't that fond of the idea but goes on the fist session to please her sister. Turns out that the best thing for her to do is to write a diary. Follow Berry Punch's life through the seasons, starting at the 1000th Summer Sun Celebration.
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A funny little idea, I guess. Kinda looking forward to some character interaction.
Would be funny, if a little sad, if Berry did manage to sober up...Only to be thrown off the wagon by the events of a certain Hearts and Hooves day...
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I don't swear that much
Fucking unicorn sluts, why can’t every damn unicorn go fuck a cactus.
LoL!
This is the best *Buy some apples* characterasation of Berry Punch that I've ever seen except from Forecast by Jondor! oh, Ebba mentioned that her OC would be bartender in a story you was working on!
Sorry for not getting arouned to read it eatlier, but you know, you could at least have told me that you'd published it and I would have read it right away!
Can't wait for next update
Keam
Hey just wanted to thank you for using my oc in your fanfic
So it's been awhile since i posted the first chapter, it's just that I have been really busy this month. Plus I had to give the memory stick with the only copy to my teacher 'cause I was stupid enough to think that she would give it back in like a week or so. Turns out I had to wait in like a month. So I will be able to actually start writing tomorrow.
And thanks for all (just 4) the nice comments. It really makes my day, even if I'm kind of shy and won't reply becuase I'm scared of grammar natzis and so on, but I do read it.
I'll keep that in mind Bloody Brandy, and I promise to go little easy on the language Berry Punch.
Okay, I'm hoping to hear Berry's thoughts on some other characters too, now
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Don't worry, it's coming.
This is so awesome!
I can tell you, I'm really picky with what a good characterisation of Berry Punch is, and this is. THE BEST!
Can't wait to see more! Mvh Keam
4423961 I'm going to be a grammarnazi and say one little thing...
If you are writing to someone in english then don't use "mvh" it's swedish and nopony will understand!
thats all.
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Sorry
I was on my way in to my lesson so I was a little stressed!
4431129 ahahah ok
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Yep
Well. Looks like someones going to promote the crap out of this story...
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(spoiler alert! It's you, ehehehe)
Thank you soooooooooo much
Guess who is getting a cameo in the next chapter
Can you give me some feedback though?
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Me? OhmygoshthankyousoveryverymuchSigne!
I haven't read it yet. I'll give feedback when I read it tomorrow!
Really nice chapter you have hear. Now, we actually start to see some improvement in Berry Punch. She want to be more social, and she want to talk to people. You've also set this thing with Berry Pinch being Berry Punch's daughter straight: she were only babysitting her. Can't wait to see more!
// Keam
This is a really cool idea and I've been enjoying it so far. I'm very excited where Berry's diary leads to next