She has been spotted again, the lavender death is growing bolder sir.
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She has been spotted again, the lavender death is growing bolder sir.
Lavender Death? That sounds like the new Head & Shoulders Body Wash Shampoo!
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I'd buy it
4374470 Who wouldn't! Seen those Even The Angels Will Fall commercials? Yeah, it works the same, only the ones falling from a skyscraper are your enemies!
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dat avatar
4374481 Ah, yes. You're either part of the solution or part of the problem, friend. The Gallus Gallus Domesticus will rise.
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4374492 Time to make an army of mutant fox to stop this. TO THE LAB!
4374860 Ah thanks for catching those
Sorry, the switching threw me off. I was sorely losing track of who was doing what. And at this point I might need a little more exposition to figure out why they're doing it ...
We live in sad times when a guard prioritizes "relieving himself" over 'relieving himself. Sad, sad times.
It's also sad how many likes you got on this story. I will not directly comment on the quality of this story to avoid being mean, but when much superior stories get less likes due to being not as lucky, it's sad.
i thought this would be a twilight is banished and enemy of equestria but still protect it from gryphons fic but i cant tell
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You commented on why you disliked so I can't complain
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You'll find out the why the next chapter
Also to help understand the switching better every time I put a horizontal line the point of view is changing
4374470 If Princess Twilight endorses it, I will buy 20 crates of it!
4374463 I'd say it's more of a cocktail.
I'm interested by this. The switching wasn't horrible, it fits if you read about a paragraph or so.
I can't help but feel I'm missing something. What that exactly is, I don't know.
Perhaps backstory?
4374492 The new username and avatar do not suit you
4379628 I am Normal.
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Wow I was way to happy at that point in time to realize what you had said
But before I make a big deal out of this I want to ask two questions
1st Was your mind in the gutter when you read about the guard relieving himself
2nd off I want to know what superior stories you are referring to, because 5 likes are not that many likes at all (which was how many the story had at that time) and if a good story has less than that I can easily fix that.
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1. Sure.
2. I have a terrible memory and only remember that such fics exist, not which ones they were. I'm sure I could sift through this website to find some that qualify, but honestly I do not care that much about making you happy.
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I don't understand what you just typed
Edit: yeah that comment is so confusing I'm just going to delete it
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Thank you that is so much more suiting than the other name avatar combo you had doing
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you tricked me.....bastard.
I was so excited to see an unread chapter in my cancelled/hiatus folder.