Niko Bellic. He was a well-known criminal in the underworld of Liberty City, but after he killed his crime bosses, he seemed to disappear entirely, only popping up here and there for a car theft or gunfight. He was the best of the best, so you can imagine his surprise when a bomb went off, and he sank to the bottom of the ocean, apparently drowning.
Or at least, he thought he had drowned.
When Princess Luna and Princess Celestia decide that they want to reform Niko so that he helps the world, they chose none-other than the Element of Laughter, Pinkie Pie, to do the job. While Niko tries to continue his normal life with the addition of this new companion, Pinkie shows Niko that there is something more powerful than money, crime, and death. Something that even he can muster up inside of him and use against his foes. If he survives the pony herself, that is.
This is a very interesting concept, so I'll see where this goes.
4004096 I literally thought of this a few months ago, but it evolved just today, and so I decided to get working on it, and here we are now! I hope to have the next chapter up by tomorrow, Thursday probably, so keep watching!
Perfect I love where this is going
I would have wanted this to be a bit longer, but this delivers the concept well enough for now. I look forward to seeing where this goes to.
Niko's priorities appear to be in check for now.
Roman: Cousin, let's go bowling!
Niko: I can't right now I'm dealing with these weird cartoon ponies.
Roman:.......So that's a yes?
4004549 I know this one was a bit short, but in all honesty, the next chapter will be longer, I promise!
4005534 LOL! I do intend to get Roman in here to stir up a bit of chaos. I also have a few twists and turns up my sleeve for the future...
i don't think Nico is Russian. Yep, pretty sure he isn't.
Other that that it's a nice story.
Oh, also, if this is a game-complete Nico then either Roman or Kate should be dead.
4005764 Actually, the guidebook says he's Eastern-European, and Russia is Eastern-Europe, so he is Russian.
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-wikipedia
4005779 It said "To be left to the interpretation of the player," so I simply say he's Russian or some nearby country, I don't disagree with you, but it's too late to change it.
4005764 And on that note, Roman is alive, and Kate is dead, but as he drowns, his last thoughts were of Kate.
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not a Russian female name
Russia never participated in Yugoslav wars outside of peacekeeping forces
same as above
again, same as above, Russia didn't participated and was way too far away to have an army unit consisting of his co-villagers even exist.
Niko: For the last time! I'm NOT russian!
4005821 Okay, okay! He's NOT Russian. I will address that in the next chapter. How does this sound?
"You know, I'm not actually Russian," Niko said angrily to the pedestrian. "Stupid Americans, not being able to tell one country from another..."
4006324 No, he's not. I will address that in the future. For now, PLEASE just DROP ALL THE HYPE ABOUT THIS MISTAKE!
4008121 cool.
4008125 It wasen't really hype. IT was a joke. Multiple times in the GTA IV story. Niko says "I'm not Russian"
4009450 Okay, I suppose not exactly HYPE, but whatever it is can be dropped, I am addressing his nationality in the next chapter. He is Yugoslavian, I have now decided.
People complaining about Niko's country of origin had a role in this chapter's existence, didn't it?
Anyways, so far so good. Can't wait for Roman and Pinkie to go bowling. I could never beat Roman...
God Dammit Roman I don't want to go bowling
HEY! I SAID THAT!
4014050 LOL! I very well might add that last part of your comment into the next chapter. And yes, I finally addressed his origin so people can drop it.
4014167 One of the most well-known parts of the game, so IT WILL be included.
4014243 Yeah! Happy with how that played out?
4014535 Thanks for catching that, I fixed it.
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Round 2! Fight!
4015714 LOL!
4015454 Serbian or Yugoslavian, I will say that it was a mix of both.
4015072 Very :3
4015793 i think Serbs and Yugos hate each other. so i won't be so sure.
4016069 AH! But here's the thing: So Niko's father, the Serbian, was an alcoholic who abused his sons, and his Yugoslavian wife. Niko's mother was nice to the boy, so Niko fought for Yugoslavia, and hated his father forever after. Sound enough for you?
I can already think of the possibilities of what will happen
4019937 sounds kinda good, actually. not the whole "abuse sons and wife" part, but the motivation behind all that.
4022214 I hope you don't mean that that shouldn't be in the story, because that's a huge part of Niko's life, and it will be included, probably around Chapter 3.
if pinkie punches Roman (even by accident) I WILL BE SOOOOOO HAAAAPPPPPPYYYYY
4025254 No promises... but nothing says she won't...
4005764 oh but he IS!
4042237 no he isn't
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What did I say about dropping it? Here's what I've scrounged together:
Roman Bellic is Serbian, according to the GTA Wiki. You can find it if you wish. Both Roman's and Niko's fathers were abusive, and both of their mothers were loving. Niko was Yugoslavian, and fought in the wars. Roman's mother sent Roman to live "the American dream," and she was killed later. Niko found her body afterwards. I chose to say that the pair were cousins by their fathers, therefore Niko's father was Serbian, moved to Yugoslavia, and since Serbians and Yugoslavians don't get along well, he decided to take control of his family by beating them. This propelled Niko to fight for Yugoslavia rather than Serbia. Sound enough?
I STILL cannot beat Roman in bowling...
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4077315 Aw man! Am I the only one? Good luck in the future!
Someone needs to say this but
THEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER. THERE IS SAID IT.
4082166 I take it you are referring to Pinkie and Niko? Well, I can't say that I usually invent ships, but we'll see how the story progresses over time.
Pinkie needs a RPG bit$&es love RPGs
Eh, the pacing was a bit weird for my taste, but this was still a good chapter. Keep up the good work!
Yeah, the antagonist is fucked already. Tell me, how many people have fucked with Niko and have lived to tell about it? Exactly.
4092323 Not even the major part of the police force.
4092393 The LCPD knows not to fuck with Niko, but due to forces they don't understand, they try to stop him anyways.
The LSPD wouldn't have any of that shit. No, they'd just try to kill him instead. The loss of a star allows them to spawn more helicopters much quicker.
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Forgive me if I mixed this comment up, but anyway, your opinion has been noted for the future! And to answer your question, it's not only Niko they have to worry about. How many people have messed with Pinkie and gotten away with it?
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The LCPD will probably come into this later on.
4093105 Well, she beat up a considerable amount of the changeling army, so it's safe to say that if the LCPD were to mess with her, they'd be just as fucked.
The LSPD has dealt with weirder shit. They wouldn't take shit from a pink haired girl.
I am loving this
4093650 Well, I would have to say the LSPD isn't made up of overweight men.
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4094385 Glad you two are enjoying it! Updates come out frequently!
Swing launch glitch now.