• Member Since 14th Feb, 2014
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TrojanHorseWhisperer


Music is my life. No surprise that Vinyl Scratch is my favourite pony then.

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Beany Buns lives in the town of Apples Bramley. She loves the simpler things in life. Food. Music. Working hard. She's pretty normal for a Pegasus, except she still doesn't have a cutie mark. One day, she meets a Unicorn name Miles McBridle, who will change her life forever. she finds that he holds a big secret. She also finds herself dragged into something a lot bigger and sinister than she ever imagined. What will become of Beany and Miles? More importantly, what will happen to the princesses?

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This is my first fanfiction of anything. This is also my first publicly available story. Any criticism or pointers are much appreciated. I tried to keep the chapters short and sweet. Partly because I'd get bored half way through but also makes the slightly easier to pick up where you left off. That said, don't take this story too seriously, because I certainly didn't.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 4 )

This is a really good story, KEEP IT UP :D

First, get rid of the black and red alicorn in the cover art.
Second, you'll want your chapters to be at least a thousand words minimum in order to be taken seriously.
Third, the name "Beany Buns" makes it sound like her special talent is related to farting. FYI.

I tried. I truly did. But I can't go any farther on this one.

4003326 cheers. And that's what I thought about her name so I kept it because it was kind of funny. Originally it was Butter Bean but the current one was funnier.

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