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like where this is going
So lets see anypony who ever crossed Rarity:
Blueblood
The Diamond dogs
Suri
Nightmare Rarity
Trenderhoof
I guess Trixie, Discord, Chrysalis, etc, count too but that wasn't as personal. Also other ponies in town you can give reasons for. Oh well~
I'm curious to see how Rarity will make her own harem.
Rarity! Stop! *A white stallion with a two-toned golden mane stands outside the window as Rarity drinks herself to stupidity* Rarity, I have always loved you...
(( I would offer my OC as a "target." ))
4384723 pm me your reason why and I'll allow it
She could make a lot of bits selling the tape to Rainbow Dash.
I am curious about one thing, are any of her targets the other mane 6 or spike?
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That's a good idea. But the mane six has not earned Rarity's vengeance.
4422304 Now that I think about she could just sell her the spitfire ponyquin. And so began her side business of selling lifelike ponyquins.
4422343
Interesting suggestion. I'll keep that in mind
never mind i take back what i said in chapter 1
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I'm going to assume you read the warning in the beginning. If you didn't like what happened to Soarin, it will get better with Thunderlane.
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there was a fucking warning
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This was at the beginning of the chapter. Unless the Author's Notes didn't show up.
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didn't see that till now
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I do hope the chapter wasn't too terrible 
Well I'm very sorry the warning didn't get to you in time.
4427780
no the chapter was well written but im not a whole fan of the butt fucking a stallion thing
other then that this chapter was cool keep up the good work
4427828
I'm very well aware of the disliking of the "butt fucking", I'm not into that myself, but this is more about Rarity's revenge, not her victims' pleasures. So there shouldn't be more "butt fucking", unless the pony deserved it. Glad you at least enjoy my work.
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i think your right on that one soarin and thunderlane and all the others who crossed rarity deserve to suffer like that
I want all her victims to band together and avenge themselves on her after all this is done.
Come one, make it go full circle!
4859023 gangbang(rape) headcannon for ending approved!
This doesn't really seem like revenge, just a quick buck.
I was expecting cadence to walk in or it to cut to later where rarity is mailing the bachelor party photos as well as ones from a hidden camera in the room to cadence. Or maybe this is just phase 1 in her plan?
Either way I do enjoy a nice throat f*ck. Some grammar errors like "You said you had to go to Ponyville this weekend correct?" and "So deep that his deep".
Still a good chapter, can't wait to see what else she has planned.
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Well there are many forms of revenge. If Shining refused, Rarity would've shown the incriminating photos.
5624591 Still, it seemed like she got the short end of the stick.
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Well I wouldn't call it short, but she did get to be on the receiving end. Basically her reasoning was Armor wasn't going to have another go with her because he's married and she wants another go. So by blackmailing, she gets what she wants, if he refused, she would've ruined his career and marriage. So technically it is revenge before the revenge.
Asked Rarity. What indeed ? just look at this next sentence.
And I super tight flank? I thought her name was Rarity , oh well she is said that's her name is now. Super tight flank.
Her buttocks continually vibrate? I'm sure thats not normal, they should not be doing that and i'm sure that CONSTANTLY vibrating buttocks are not a desirable feature.
Aren't most wild berries usually poisonous ?
I'll stay away from your constantly vibrating poison tasting arse thanks, super tight flank.
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You know you're the first to look at it that way. And thinking about it, it's relatively funny. And thank you for that sharp eye, can't believe I never noticed it.
But I do hope Rarity's unnatural rear doesn't deter you from enjoying the story.
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Any author that can take a joke deserves a bit more of a read
I do warn you I'm a terrible pedant, and may break down again if i find another hilariously awkward sentence.
I love the cover image and like to imagine Rarity speaking with that crop in her mouth, "Arfffraiiiff to geffff Dirrtdgghhhhhh"
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So long as you have a good, explainable reason, as well as not being malicious in your comments, say whatever you wish. I only want readers to enjoy my work.
Thanks
the next target is going to be blueblood, it has to be with their history
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If you have any suggestions on targets and how they're punished, and why they deserve punishment. I'm all ears mate.
5699370 With blueblood I'd imagine Rarity would go full-on dominatrix mode on him whipping out the most extreme stuff on, and for, him. Though, even a lady would not stoop to mutilation, blood , scat or watersports, those are for uncivilized barbarians.
edit: my suggestion as to the next target was more of a guess on who the last victim would be, I just assumed that Blueblood, as the male who humiliated her most would be saved for last with the most planning gone into it.
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Interesting observation. For the sake of the surprise, I cannot confirm or deny your foreshadowing, so I hope you stay tuned to find out.
Other than Rarity, Big Mac definitely got the best end of the revenge scheme.
Even when hes straight Braeburn still gets pounded, there is no escape for him.
Good chapter, I can't wait to see what she comes up with for a finale, the obvious last target is Blueblood but I am a bit disappointed there hasn't been a mare target yet when you kept mentioning it being mare or stallion.
For now I'm just going to imagine that the ending is her going to turn the rest of the mane 6 into slaves/pets at once. That should keep me busy until its finished.
"Dear
WhoreMiss Rarity" Classy as always Blueblood.I was curious as to what his punishment was going to be, fitting considering what he planned. But what would have Rarity have done if he got greedy and wanted her to himself?
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Rarity has a plan for anything.
Improvised
Well that was interesting. One grammar thing though is in the second paragraph "Rarity moaned loudly, her eyes blindfolded, her body tied up," It should be Trixie not Rarity tied up.
I kind of wish we had a better look inside of Rarity's head near the end like what her thoughts were about the whole thing.
That being said I always like seeing the princesses as doms and it was also nice to see Rarity on the receiving end for once.
Is this the end of it or will there be another bonus?
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No that's it, I want my readers to imagine what will happen next. Leave the story sorta own ended.
Karma, you gotta love karma.
Looks like Rarity caught a case of the rapey.