After Their Deaths two friends Black and Oliver who are also bronies. Come to Equestria in shapes they did not except to be in. Can they integrate into pony society and live there or will they die again.
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Bronies dies.
Bronies don't give a fuck.
Bronies goes to Equestria because " Chosen One ".
Bronies appears in the Everfree.
Yeah no, it's not going to work, especially because I don't care about the MC so far and the story is riddled with the bad overdone clichés ALL BiE stories do.
Apart from the oh so many grammatical errors, I quite like this story. I am interested as to what will happen next, keep it up. :)
3998230 Ah so you like self-inserts. Good for you.
if done right this story has real potential will they try to be good in there new "villain" bodies or will he be a sarcastic "mega sombra" or something
I actually like this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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1. couldnt think of any thing else in transporting them to equestria and i hate the whising upon a star thing to get there.
2. well thats the point it´s a self insert fic and i don´t generaly give a fuck about anything even if i died.
3. no there is not going to be any of that i dont even have a viliian planned for a veary long time. it´s just be those to fucking a round in equestria for a long time and them going threw the bronie cheklist.
4. well that was the point.
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Bro, title stealing is not cool.
3999948 All of which is boring, and over done.
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4007509 and grammar won´t be any better for it is my arch nemesis
Well the Grammer could be worse... But its still readable...
yes best song ever i approve
HAHA... Not bad... Kinda interesting! I kinda wonder what will happen... I'm thinking someponys start freeking out when they enter ponyville... It's gonna be intersting!
Less grammatical errors than last chapter. Keep up the good work and I just might give this a favorite!
The story is okay... BUT there are a lot of MAJOR word flaws without the story.
I went and read though a big chunk of the story but I can't find the words you messed up anymore... I'm sure they are still there... It was something like you useing "There, Instead of Where" And things like that...
If u add nix make black and Oliver take care of her it would be awesome
Hey dude, you need an editor? I can help edit the story if you want, Just message me.
4385659 dude thank you it´s really appreciated. I send you the next chapter as soon as I´m done
4387917 Your welcome, i just want to help this story out. I will edit the chapter as soon as you send it to me.