Matthew, a broken man from the heart of New York City. He has done so much for others in his life... yet... his life isn't that cheerful. His brother, shot to death. His parents, also dead. Sister, suicide. Looking out on the New York skyline from the top of his old apartment, he sees something in the corner of his eyes... that something would change his life forever. A filly, baby, Luna.
I give credit to Alcatraz, for editing, letting me set up similar points, and being an awesome writer making the other My Little Luna story. It inspired me to become an author on fimfiction so I highly give Alcatraz credit for most everything in my story....
Oh and yes, I did get permission. Just like to state that before anyone else says I'm ripping Alcatraz off.
[EDIT]: Editor wanted!
Oh and let me just say...
Cutest.
Cover art.
Ever.
OMG... Yes.... YES!!! SO MUCH YES! Yeah, I am pleased with this.. Lol. However there are quite a few mistakes, and the 2nd chapter repeats after the first "darkness." perhaps I could proofread for you?
4046686 Well, I already have someone helping me with the story, so thanks for the offer! I'll go back in later chapters to fix certain mistakes.
4046974 no reason to not have 2 people ;)
Sorry I haven't posted Ch. 3 yet... But I'm working on another story right now as well. So if you give me some more time, I think you'll find both to be... exhilarating
Purposeful? (have a filly, then got a filly
)
No one is 2 words.
Typically, people put lines between different people (along with ponies, in this case) talking. (Applies to more than these in the story)
(taken from Wikipedia, if you believe this to be incorrect then OK) "Alabaster is a name applied to varieties of two distinct minerals"
No real reason for is to be italicized here...
*too short, put a period in-between me and Her instead of a period, and "high reaches"? Really?
Perhaps "Not too many sounds, as per the usual." instead?
Put a comma in-between stairwell and My instead of a period and perhaps "My mind focused only on my brother" instead?
*too well
Did you mean something more like "Fine, since this is your first time being sick, you can have a paid day off."? Also, this might just be my brain not remembering, but did you ever mention what his job was prior?
Other than those, I like the story, primarily because I like Luna, and My Little Dashie was the first fanfic that really made me happy.
409330Thank you for pointing out some of the faults. I'll be going over this again later. Oh, and I did mention his job in chapter 1. Just not in real big detail as of yet.
sex scene pl0x
Thats a joke btw
Hmm.. this is good, I've only read one other my little Luna style fic.... And it wasn't all too good. This one is well detailed and pretty good. Its got good fillers too.
4140804 Why thank you.
Glad you like it!
If you people want to know what's happening at the moment with Ch4 look on my most recent blog post.
4140804
You should check out my one then :P
4201241 His too.
Interesting. I like it. But you do know that Chapter 2 repeats, right?
4203798
BETTER FIX THAT.
4204679 It has been done
Alrighty good people. Looks like Ch4 is going through the last of the editing process. It SHOULD be done by Saturday.
Just kidding it's done NOW. :D
nteresting.... i take it you live in new york, or you do research?
i await to see the path this story takes
4207216 I... used to live in New York. I now reside on the west coast. Also, yes, this story does have some different course of action in the thick of it to add some flare.
You should have Luna practice magic on the car and restore it, just saying. I hate beat up cars. Update soon.
4209528 Yeahh...
I guess I haven't really touched up on the magic portion...
Just give me 1 more week. Sorry it keeps being delayed but, with the vacation and the writer's block... yeah.
I'll try to be done by next Sunday if anything else with Ch5.
I love this story
I. Quite a tad bit confused....
4330750 He's on his cross-country journey to his parents house in Washington. Since he can't take a plane flight (You probably know why) he's taking an old ford expedition.
4330780 oh.... That's right... Its 11:55 coupled with the fact of like once a month updates coupled with I just got off work, add on I haven't reread the story and not even twilight studying would make sense... It doesn't either
4330791
Well, get some rest then! 
4330808 but I dun wanna...
Without reading back was this the story that celestia knows Luna is already there or was it the other guys story....
4330812 That was probably Alcatraz's you're thinking about.
Celly doesn't know she's here...
Yet.
4330846 kk I knew one of them had a note.
And by celestia if you end it like my little dashie.... LUNA WILL NOT BE TAKEN AWAY!!!
Well I won't kill you but ill strap you to a chair and make you listen to Justin beiber or one direction for an entire year.
Then see if you can write better
Muahahhahahahahh *cough*
I need to sleep
EDIT: though, if you do end it with Luna going back. And end it with Luna not wanting to leave, but you stepping through the portal or however Luna gets back, IT DOES leave it open for a sequel. My Little Matthew hahahaha
Wait, from sleepy and boredom comes inspiration only you can write. I have a couple ideas on this sequel now if u want me to share please pm..... Ooh
4330694 Why thank you kind sir!
Alright, so I got the plot down for chapter 6. Now, here comes the details... Details, details, details...
4330858 Maybe I'll do that just to mess with you.
Earthquakes are worse. :)
4417173 memecrunch.com/meme/I558/touche/image.png
4417173 or a volcano. Mwahahahahahahahahaha!
4417340 ...or a meteor.
4417378 or multiple meteors.
mind. Blown.
4417385 Musn't be beat...
...
...OR A BLACK HOLE.
4417474 Really? Blackhole?
Seriously though.Throw an entire Galaxy in.
4417901 QUASAR?!?!
4418010 *Sigh* I guess there is only one way to win. DEUS EX MACHINA!
*The universe collasping on itself*
4418464 NO! *hand clap. I WILL NOT BE BEATEN!
...
...TWO parallel universes colliding, forcing space time itself to rip apart.
4419668 No! I will not be beaten by an ameture! *Throw a small rock the side of a 9mm bullet at another rock*
4419678 I'm waiting.*Smug face. 25.media.tumblr.com/961d2ff5e6b09a416dc66fc874ca3bc4/tumblr_mmhw2kxqiq1rvpe60o1_400.jpg
4502750 A robotic voice:"Project 'Noob', initiated."
*The worlds fall, universes imploded leaving only the eternal void for future worlds to take shape*
4505024 Challenge accepted.
The entire Multi-verse collapses.