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  • T Epic Rap Battles of MLP

    a silly little thing the ponies in my head persuaded me to do.
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  • T No Longer an Enigma

    How Enigma, from 'Epic Rap Battles of MLP', met his current friends.
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  • T My Little Lantern: Friendship is Colorful

    A sort of "what if" involving lantern power rings and a few friends.
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    Fluttershy is sucked into another universe, but she isn't quite herself...
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    Something to help me keep track of my apparently impressive imagination.
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  • T Virtue and Vice: Equestria

    Based (loosely) on the JLA/JSA storyline of the same name, this recounts what happens before and during the most troublesome time in the history of Equestria's specialized taskforces.
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  • T This Is What Happens

    An OC from my other stories has a friendly spar with a certain famous DJ. Things quickly get out of hand (hoof?).
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  • 24w, 6d
    Revamp of My OC's Bio and Something Else

    3 comments · 89 views
  • 34w, 1d
    A Spin-Off and AU of Three Different Stories...

    ...this should be interesting.

    Okay, so a few of my friends, Vi, and I are making a story that revolves around a DC comics crossover arc. Not going to say any names, yet, but it will be loosely based around the original. While that may not seem exciting to some, it's something I'm actually excited for in the first time for a while. :twilightsheepish:

    "However, there's likely to be less work on other stories we normally post. Don't be sad, we will eventually return to ERBoMLP, TIWH, and NLaE. The other ones, however, might very well stay on hiatus indefinitely. Sorry!"

    Oh, and no, we don't pull April Fools pranks. I just find them too mean-spirited, and I don't want to make people lose trust in me. So no, this isn't a prank, guys. We really are doing all the above.

    "That's about all we wanted to say. Link to the blog with other stuff that would make this one longer than it already is."

    Have a nice day!

    Enigma out.~

    2 comments · 102 views
  • 43w, 6d
    New Story! Also, ERBoMLP News

    Okay, so Rhy, Vi, and I have been working on a few new stories on his page. You should give the first one-shot (link here) a read, then decide whether or not you want to read the sequel(s). I put it like that since one of them might not be visible to certain users.

    "They're anthro, but based off a few characters you might know. Original characters, and an alternate universe to both 'An Alternate Path' (mature) and 'ERBoMLP', believe it or not!"

    Speaking of ERBoMLP, for those of you who are itching for a new rap battle, you'll have to wait a bit. With college and the chapters needed to get it up and running, it's still got a ways to go. (The rap battle, itself, is already done, though.) We thank each and every one of you for your patience! :twilightsmile:

    "That's about all we wanted to say. Link to the blog with other stuff that would make this one longer than it already is."

    Have a nice day!

    Enigma out.~

    4 comments · 137 views
  • 49w, 6d
    Mother of Luna... This Is Awesome!

    So yea, you know how I barely got any gifts from my family? I just got the ones from Grandma and Grandpa.

    And what were they?

    A 3DS, Luigi's Mansion Dark Moon, and Pokemon X.

    "Yea, they are awesome. You'll probably miss us for a few days... after we're allowed to use it for the first time, of course. His parents aren't letting him get them until after he passes his next two tests. Not take - pass. They're rather strict."

    Ironic when you consider I'm 21. Anyways, thanks to all of you for the birthday wishes! And no, I'm not going to touch alcohol. I'm not going to die like my grandfather did.

    "That's about all we wanted to say. Link to the blog with other stuff that would make this one longer than it already is."

    Have a nice day!

    Enigma out.~

    12 comments · 197 views
  • 50w, 20h
    B-Day Stuffing

    Hey, another rather uneventful birthday. Not that I'm complaining, of course. :derpytongue2:

    Though, if there would be one gift I'd like, it'd be either art of Enigma or Gel, or to actually have that TVTropes page started.

    "That's about all we wanted to say. Link to the blog with other stuff that would make this one longer than it already is."

    Have a nice day!

    Enigma out.~

    12 comments · 203 views
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Conditions arise that cause two different dimensions, vastly different, to cross inhabitants over to the other world. Now they must find a way to get back before it is too late.

Do you use the human tag if they're human-shaped but not human? :?

This is a crossover with Homestuck. If you have not read the web comic yet, I'd suggest that you do so before reading this. If there are questions about this, I'd be happy to answer them.

First Published
25th Mar 2012
Last Modified
6th Apr 2012
#1 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Gog damn it, Karkat! Not troll romance again! :flutterrage:

#2 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

Looking good so far, surprised to see no-one else has commented. In this chapter Rainbow Dash rails on Karkat for no reason beyond existing. She can't have overhead him shouting as she bursts into the library in a hurry, and then starts berating Karkat for being a useless wriggler! Also I don't think Karkat would give his name so freely, the trolls withheld their names from the humans for quite some time. He could use his screen name temporarily, I guess. Also your chapter two's block format is quite ugly when compared to chapters 1,3 and 4. I recommend fixing that up. :twilightsmile:

You're spot on with the speech, I was quite surprised how well you did it actually. Karkat sounds just like Karkat, Nepeta's cat puns are everywhere and Equus needs a towel (obviously). I don't envy you when you move onto Terezi though. Your ponies aren't looking bad either, in fact I think I think this deserves a favourite. Good job, and I hope you keep writing this. :pinkiehappy:

Actually, one thing that might be putting people off is the extra short chapters. Some people won't read stories comprised of thousands of smaller chapters; it'd be better to consolidate them. This allows frequent updating though, so I'm all for it.

#3 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

>>407065

thank you, both for the advice and for the favorite! :pinkiehappy: i fixed chapter two, btw. :twilightblush: i can't believe i forgot that, though i'm glad everything else is meeting expectations!

#4 · 137w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Hooray, you took my suggestion! Now I feel important. :raritystarry: Putting the text in colour would be cool; I'm not sure how the selection is on Fimfiction though. Pretty cool chapter; I wonder who the other troll they brought over to Equestria is. Just one niggling thought, Karkat walks outside yet doesn't sunlight burn trolls? I thought that was why they were nocturnal and why Kanaya was special.

I'm technically currently writing four stories, so I can share your sentiments. (Although currently I'm failing to update three of them. :facehoof:) However much you get done is enough. As long as you enjoy writing it, we'll enjoy reading it; I'm sure. :twilightsmile:

#5 · 137w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

>>416535

you'll have to wait and see!~ :twilightsmile:

you do realize that it's at night, right? :applejackunsure: Karkat was staring up at the moon...at least, i think i put that detail in there...

and i'm glad that i'm not the only one dealing with that sort of thing. :pinkiehappy:

#6 · 137w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

>>416573 Ack! A reread tells me that you did indeed mention the moon. :twilightoops: I must have just been confused as to why they would all be up so late. Rainbow Dash finding out Fluttershy was missing at night and so on. Sorry about that. :facehoof:

#7 · 137w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

>>416626

maybe it's cider season? that's the first thing that comes to mind, at least.

#8 · 134w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Try to keep your tenses consistent.

#9 · 132w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

cant wait to finish my homework to get more into this :pinkiehappy: :heart:

#10 · 130w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Twilight's so going to accidentally become Karkat's moirail. I am all for that. Wait... this is the last chapter? MOAR. MOAR.

#11 · 130w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

>>652939

i might continue this...when i get back from vacation. :derpytongue2:

#12 · 130w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

This is absolutely brilliant.  You nailed the trolls' and ponies' personalities perfectly.  I cannot wait to read more.

#13 · 117w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

You really should continue this, its absolutely brilliant

#14 · 63w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

yes more homestuck fan fic stories these are really hard to find or at least the good ones. and even harder to find homestuck fans.

#15 · 63w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

>>407046

hey seems legit but seriously karkat do not explain it it was confusing as hell the first time i was reading homestuck. and had to read it once more to understand.

#16 · 50w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

i'm pretty sure nubs mcshouty isn't T)(AT whiny

#17 · 37w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Unfortun8tely, the color `darkgrey' is undefined. Try using the actual color codes used by AH. For example, my code is [color=#005682]VS[/color], Karkat would 8e [color=#626262]KV[/color], and Nepeta would 8e [color=#416600]NL[/color].

~Vriska Serket

#18 · 37w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

You could just put in a [hr] instead of Back in the Veil/Equestria.

~Vriska Serket

#19 · 37w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

>>416535 >>416573 Don't forget that Equestria's sun isn't the s8me as Alternia's sun. It's perfectly feasi8le that whatever quality that the light from Alternia's sun has that troll skin reacts 8adly to could 8e a8sent in Equestria's sun.

~Vriska Serket

#20 · 31w, 6d ago · 1 · · Chapter 5 ·

1M 4LL FOR TH1S! TOO B4D 1TS "ON H14TUS"

#21 · 31w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Karkat's text color doesn't seem to be working for you. You could try #626262 instead of Dark Gray.

This is Tavros's. #A15000

#22 · 7w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

H-Hiatus...?! :rainbowderp:

THERE IS NO GIGAPAUSE WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT DEAR GOG UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

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