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enigmaMystere

Joined March 2012
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An author who loves to write stories with hidden and not-so-hidden references in them. Also has a friend who shares his account and loves to chat with people. "'Sup!"

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Conditions arise that cause two different dimensions, vastly different, to cross inhabitants over to the other world. Now they must find a way to get back before it is too late.

Do you use the human tag if they're human-shaped but not human? :?

This is a crossover with Homestuck. If you have not read the web comic yet, I'd suggest that you do so before reading this. If there are questions about this, I'd be happy to answer them.

First Published
25th Mar 2012
Last Modified
6th Apr 2012

Comments ( 21 )

#1 · Chapter 3 · 120w, 6d ago · · ·

Gog damn it, Karkat! Not troll romance again! :flutterrage:

#2 · Chapter 4 · 120w, 6d ago · · ·

Looking good so far, surprised to see no-one else has commented. In this chapter Rainbow Dash rails on Karkat for no reason beyond existing. She can't have overhead him shouting as she bursts into the library in a hurry, and then starts berating Karkat for being a useless wriggler! Also I don't think Karkat would give his name so freely, the trolls withheld their names from the humans for quite some time. He could use his screen name temporarily, I guess. Also your chapter two's block format is quite ugly when compared to chapters 1,3 and 4. I recommend fixing that up. :twilightsmile:

You're spot on with the speech, I was quite surprised how well you did it actually. Karkat sounds just like Karkat, Nepeta's cat puns are everywhere and Equus needs a towel (obviously). I don't envy you when you move onto Terezi though. Your ponies aren't looking bad either, in fact I think I think this deserves a favourite. Good job, and I hope you keep writing this. :pinkiehappy:

Actually, one thing that might be putting people off is the extra short chapters. Some people won't read stories comprised of thousands of smaller chapters; it'd be better to consolidate them. This allows frequent updating though, so I'm all for it.

#3 · Chapter 4 · 120w, 6d ago · · ·

>>407065

thank you, both for the advice and for the favorite! :pinkiehappy: i fixed chapter two, btw. :twilightblush: i can't believe i forgot that, though i'm glad everything else is meeting expectations!

#4 · Chapter 5 · 120w, 4d ago · · ·

Hooray, you took my suggestion! Now I feel important. :raritystarry: Putting the text in colour would be cool; I'm not sure how the selection is on Fimfiction though. Pretty cool chapter; I wonder who the other troll they brought over to Equestria is. Just one niggling thought, Karkat walks outside yet doesn't sunlight burn trolls? I thought that was why they were nocturnal and why Kanaya was special.

I'm technically currently writing four stories, so I can share your sentiments. (Although currently I'm failing to update three of them. :facehoof:) However much you get done is enough. As long as you enjoy writing it, we'll enjoy reading it; I'm sure. :twilightsmile:

#5 · Chapter 5 · 120w, 4d ago · · ·

>>416535

you'll have to wait and see!~ :twilightsmile:

you do realize that it's at night, right? :applejackunsure: Karkat was staring up at the moon...at least, i think i put that detail in there...

and i'm glad that i'm not the only one dealing with that sort of thing. :pinkiehappy:

#6 · Chapter 5 · 120w, 4d ago · · ·

>>416573 Ack! A reread tells me that you did indeed mention the moon. :twilightoops: I must have just been confused as to why they would all be up so late. Rainbow Dash finding out Fluttershy was missing at night and so on. Sorry about that. :facehoof:

#7 · Chapter 5 · 120w, 4d ago · · ·

>>416626

maybe it's cider season? that's the first thing that comes to mind, at least.

#8 · Chapter 2 · 117w, 4d ago · · ·

Try to keep your tenses consistent.

#9 · Chapter 1 · 115w, 1d ago · · ·

cant wait to finish my homework to get more into this :pinkiehappy: :heart:

#10 · Chapter 5 · 113w, 3d ago · · ·

Twilight's so going to accidentally become Karkat's moirail. I am all for that. Wait... this is the last chapter? MOAR. MOAR.

#11 · Chapter 5 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>652939

i might continue this...when i get back from vacation. :derpytongue2:

#12 · Chapter 5 · 113w, 10h ago · · ·

This is absolutely brilliant.  You nailed the trolls' and ponies' personalities perfectly.  I cannot wait to read more.

#13 · Chapter 5 · 100w, 4d ago · · ·

You really should continue this, its absolutely brilliant

#14 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

yes more homestuck fan fic stories these are really hard to find or at least the good ones. and even harder to find homestuck fans.

#15 · Chapter 3 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>407046

hey seems legit but seriously karkat do not explain it it was confusing as hell the first time i was reading homestuck. and had to read it once more to understand.

#16 · Chapter 5 · 33w, 2d ago · · ·

i'm pretty sure nubs mcshouty isn't T)(AT whiny

#17 · Chapter 2 · 20w, 4d ago · · ·

Unfortun8tely, the color `darkgrey' is undefined. Try using the actual color codes used by AH. For example, my code is [color=#005682]VS[/color], Karkat would 8e [color=#626262]KV[/color], and Nepeta would 8e [color=#416600]NL[/color].

~Vriska Serket

#18 · Chapter 4 · 20w, 4d ago · · ·

You could just put in a [hr] instead of Back in the Veil/Equestria.

~Vriska Serket

#19 · Chapter 5 · 20w, 4d ago · · ·

>>416535 >>416573 Don't forget that Equestria's sun isn't the s8me as Alternia's sun. It's perfectly feasi8le that whatever quality that the light from Alternia's sun has that troll skin reacts 8adly to could 8e a8sent in Equestria's sun.

~Vriska Serket

#20 · Chapter 5 · 14w, 5d ago · · ·

1M 4LL FOR TH1S! TOO B4D 1TS "ON H14TUS"

#21 · Chapter 5 · 14w, 5d ago · · ·

Karkat's text color doesn't seem to be working for you. You could try #626262 instead of Dark Gray.

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