The ponies' everyday lives if they were humans. Each couple of chapters is based on a different character. For example, first few is Derpy, next up is Rainbow Dash, then Fluttershy, etc. You get it. In this fanfic, they never WERE ponies and never WILL BE ponies. That's the point. I want to see what the outcome is if they are all human with the same personalities and such as on the show. Their full names won't be "Twilight Sparkle" or "Rainbow Dash" because that would be unrealistic. Those will just be their nicknames. Anyways, enjoy, and please comment, it's what motivates me to keep writing.
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Really good. Some grammar errors, but it's a great story. Keep writing.
Thanks man. Sorry about the errors, I'll try and fix them for next time. I honestly was surprised that this was approved by the mods, I thought it wasn't "MLP related" enough. It's good to know people like my writing
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Meester explained once that the rule he usually goes by is that if the characters are humanized, he judges a story's 'MLP-ness' based on the characterization and personalities and how close they are to FiM canon. Since accurate characterization is exactly what you're shooting for, you should be fine,
Dunno if that's just Meester or if all the approvers feel the same way though,
keep it up. Good if not great.
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Well done! Keep up the good work!
This is what I call a "Cliffhanger no Jutsu"
I'm taking bets; my money is on Sweetie Belle having ruined one of Rarity's masterpieces,
3988286 Lol, it's gonna be something a bit more serious than that. Ik one of Rarity's masterpieces getting ruined is dead serious, but even more serious than THAT.
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